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watzinaname
10-07-2008, 10:37 PM
Sometimes....we can do
our very best
Dot every i, cross every t
Get an A on every test

We can toil so hard
the sweat drips from our brow
Work double over time
As many hours as the day will allow

Give a plethora of patience, despite a world of worry
while providing continuous comfort and care
Putting others in the forefront...before yourself
Giving much more than a lion's share

Yet even after giving...all of that
Sometimes things don't work out
I can only imagine how difficult this must be
Outwardly strong, inwardly needing to scream and shout

But your loved ones know, you know, and
God knows all that you have done
And you shall be blessed for all your selflessness,
all the love you've given and all the compassion

And one day, she will know
How fortunate she is
that you love her so...

$$RICH$$
10-07-2008, 11:08 PM
just maybe if she look pass her own self ......i'm feeling this because it reminds me of something in my life

queentswana
10-08-2008, 03:15 PM
Surely her blessings will come, not always as we want them...but always on time.
Awesome write poet ...as always ...^5

watzinaname
10-08-2008, 06:20 PM
Yes Rich, it is my hope she'll be able to look past self...one day. Thank you.
Her blessings shall come, they probably have already begun. Thank you Sister queent.

asimplepoet
10-08-2008, 06:36 PM
watz did you take a peek in my life journal..feeling this write more than you'll evr know...awesonely exquiste write poet

cocobutterskyn
10-08-2008, 07:19 PM
Have you ever read a piece that touched soul-deep
you swear you were meant to read it, as if its apart of
the healing process? Well, this piece is that to me.
Thanks for this poetic-dose-of-medicine. I feel better already.

And I'm sure, whoever it was created for, after she read it, feels better too.


Be blessed
Coco

watzinaname
10-08-2008, 07:41 PM
Thank you for letting me know you can relate, and I'm humbled by your props asimplepoet.
That my words could possibly aid you in healing, well, once again I am humbled. Thankz a million Coco. Peace.

LovesDestiny
10-08-2008, 08:12 PM
This piece was creative and real! We don't always recognize our value at the moment but it always comes in time!

Excellent piece Sis Watz!

4EVERLUV
10-08-2008, 11:13 PM
watz:
I enjoyed this from the beginnng to the end.
Beautiful!

Much Luv

watzinaname
10-09-2008, 05:43 PM
Yes in time we know just how much we mean to another, thank you so much Sis LovesDestiny.
Glad to know you enjoyed this so 4EverLuv, thank you much.

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