Look at me dreaming of you
All I could hope is to have you...
To have you walking with me
Laughing so in love, we two
Almost drunkenly
I did imbibe of this
fantasy of you and me
Two reflective souls
of a much larger lake
Setting the perfect example
of woman and man

Was I a fool to think
The way you looked at me
I swear you did
But you looked away too quick
If words could woo
and wooing could capture
the wild elusive wings of song
would I not be perched
in your silver cage
chirping a hymn of appreciation?

Was I a fool... to think
That you would take me
As if I was yours
Was I a fool to think at all?
Nothing can shackle
the surging
emotions that erupt
from the deepest reservoirs
of the soul
when a woman's heart whispers
divine phrases

What intentions have you for me?
Do you wish to explore the possibilities?
Or are your words simply to taunt
and to tease a lonely woman
in a strange illusory world?

I've grown tired of love
You are the trouble with me
I watch you walk right by
I smile, you do not notice me
Treat my heart recklessly
All you do is toss me pennies
But the silence in me is screaming
Love, come get me

Soulosophy 2008 ©

the love sees you there
it cares
but it remains aware
to keep you from where you dare
you have no heart to spare
one heart to give just ain't fair
no reason to shed a tear
feels like a mere
illusion a vision
a prison a sight on
a love collision
divine and pure
you know you're sure
there is logic and a cure

peace

Soulosophy this was so touching, I could feel my heart sighing with each line. Love will certainly come get you, with a king who can appreciate the queen that you are.

I loved the way that this was crafted and you had me hook line and sinker from the title on. And just you wait Love has heard you cry it is on its way. It will come in its appointed time and place.

soulosophy:
As if this piece did not have me from the beginning you had to go
and end it like this:

I've grown tired of love
You are the trouble with me
I watch you walk right by
I smile, you do not notice me
Treat my heart recklessly
All you do is toss me pennies
But the silence in me is screaming
Love, come get me

Talk about wheeew....touched me so...I almost cried.
This write is ASTOUNDING.
:bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:


Much Luv

For a second i thought it was me
my love was coming feverlishly
I know dat love see u there
and what ya lonely heart has bare
for every whisper dat u speak
truely his love opens deep
and when time premit come to me
forth i loveth thee .....

Awesome write i felt all this deep in my bones

Thank you all for taking the time to read and comment on this lil piece :) Truly appreciatd :kiss: :bowdown::bowdown:

Bro Street - Nuff respect and thank you for your sweet and encouraging words, that was real special. I am moved by your style of expression :heart: :)

Sister Watinaname - Thank you and bless you for touching me with your inspirational words... I am lifted :) :heart:

asimplepoet - Bless you sis...thank you for your kind words. Indeed, everything happens as it should :) :heart:

4EVERLUV - Bless you sis, thank you for sharing your energy :heart: :):

$$RICH$$ - Awww bless you bro Rich wid da dollar signs :) Thank you for your poetic artistry :) :heart:

:hearts4:

Just makes you wanna scream out loud "LOVE COME GET ME"!

That was FIYA Sis Soul! Ima little late but just in time I see to receive that beautiful piece! I could almost hear the melody in your voice as you speak it openly (hint, hint)! LOL

Thank you for sharing this awesome piece!

As A poet i over stand that not all things written about is things felt by the writer, but what is written, is always felt,by someone, take comfort in knowing that nothing happens before time. What seems like a diss could be a blessing, and it doesn't matter how good it feels, if it's not real.

Respect sis, everytime

You've not grown tired of love, but of lusting...
for love is in all that lives, in the rose you smell, the child you bare, the birds that chirp, and last but not least...
The King that awaits you...at your appointed time.:hearts4:
Awesome piece poet! :bowdown:

what a spectacular write! How could this have gotten pass me, for it is love that I want to come get me.

Beautifully composed by a beautiful soul.