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Joyce
11-24-2001, 03:37 AM
Then she became ill.
Though her burdens were heavy,
His heart did not run.





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alyce
11-24-2001, 12:15 PM
captures a most beautiful picture in few words...
awesome love....

thank you for sharing...

a

$$RICH$$
11-24-2001, 05:27 PM
the love of he was of she
and he couldn't run away
coz of heart even in sickness

pure love through thick or thin!:heart:

UbZoRbShUn
11-24-2001, 08:54 PM
I eva tell you I love the way you Haiku????




Lovely




One

Kitana
11-24-2001, 11:31 PM
this is beauty and serenity finely woven together....

it is so easy to vow to stay by anothers side, but when a test such as this presents itself, only the true at heart will stay..

K

Joyce
11-27-2001, 12:23 PM
As always, I appreciate your comments.

cocobutterskyn
12-16-2001, 09:44 PM
This speaks of true commitment.

Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
CCBSKYN

N2urSoul
03-10-2002, 03:21 PM
in transition (moving to haikuville) :)

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