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epiphany
11-15-2001, 01:20 PM
She met this man one day
dressed real fancy, he made her day
laughed at all the jokes he said
fell for all the lines he read
he said she was fyne
with her big behind
said he took one glance
and he was in a trance
said his nature rose for sure
the moment she walk into the door
she was so flattered by this man
she couldn't breathe, lost all sense
she almost buckled to her knees
took them lines literally
she was ready to please
and before she knew
they were off to go... sleep

he........

rocked her

rocked her

all night long

then....he rocked

some more til early dawn
she couldn't believe the love she felt
when he was done she spoke her heart
said she loved him and never want to part
he rose up and shook his suit
then began dressing, put on his boots
she looked real puzzled.... to him she said
"Last night meant something...."
and he bowed his head
got his coat and headed for the door
then he stop and face her, coolly he said
"Baby.....life is chances, we take our risk
when I first saw you, I couldn't resist
one thing to remember, about men like me
is we always want..... what we see
I'll tell you lies, even fantasized
thats what you want to hear
but once I get the lovin
theres nothin left to give"
he walked out the door.....
but peeked in once more.......he said

"Hey.......

thats reality!"

:eeek:



Epiphany(c)2001
:heart:

cocobutterskyn
11-15-2001, 01:53 PM
That is a precious gift. It's the last part of us a man should receive. Only long after......... he has proven he deserves to receive it. Not to forget, some can fake a long time....so we gots to be patient, observant and not hard up..... men can pick up on that......some women wear it on their foreheads.

This my dear sister, was a very good read. Thanks.

Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
CCBSKYN

epiphany
11-16-2001, 07:53 AM
I agree.....may be a bit old fashioned
but it works for me......savor the moment
of the mind, and the body soon follows...


Epiphany :heart:

baller
03-04-2002, 06:51 PM
it's not good to hold out too long, either. even a good man will get tired of beggin'...and move on. there's a fine line between being patient and being realistic. PERSONALLY, I DON'T HIT IT AND QUIT IT...unless it wasn't worth hittin' in the first place.:)

it's more a question of taking the time to get to know your partner. too many SISTAHS are too busy listening to the lines to get to know a brutha. men are very obvious...if you take the time to get to know us.

loved the flow.

$$RICH$$
03-04-2002, 09:25 PM
i'll agree wit baller coz dis be my way of it all ......nice piece of art

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