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Joyce

11-10-2001, 02:42 AM

Womanhood distrubed
The removal of one breast
Her scars heal slowly

Copyright © 2001 by Joyce Rogers

WindWalker

11-10-2001, 12:06 PM

I thought this was very good!!!!!!!!

Kitana

11-10-2001, 07:56 PM

as her mind tries to convince her heart that she is still a woman..

a sad fact of life for too many women...

well said....

k

Hunter

11-10-2001, 11:28 PM

this flowed reality!

tight scribing sis!!

:heart:

$$RICH$$

11-11-2001, 03:59 AM

upon she one seals
implant to recovery

Joyce

11-12-2001, 11:10 AM

The removal of one breast can be devastating, but I work with a lady who has lost both breats and she is an inspiration to me...truly.

$$RICH$$

07-20-2005, 06:41 AM

this still takes hold
words can't express the feelings it leaves

deepy

07-20-2005, 03:45 PM

powerful piece Joyce
releasing,removing pain
awakening life

Akilah

07-20-2005, 09:16 PM

My thoughts and prayers
are with you sweetheart,
I hope you are doing well

Love ya,
Akilah :grouphug: