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In the garden of Serenity

Nita
03-22-2001, 03:28 PM
A bit of heaven in this place
Scent of love, sweet to the taste
In this garden, we become one
United, never undone

When I'm with you, you fill my soul
With each stroke my treasures unfold
Soft moans and whispers, as you make love to me
Here in the Garden of Serenity

I want for nothing more,
I see the moolight on the sea,
waves beating the shore
Here in the Garden of Serenity

A bed made of sand
making love hand in hand
in the Garden of Serenity
I am your lady and you're my man

And so in the Serene Garden I have landed
It inspires my soul to see such beauty
I stand here, giving my all
to my King,in the Garden of Serene :lovestruc:

nubianlover
03-22-2001, 03:31 PM
in the garden of nubia
the sandy space i trace
the love of yo face i
place before u the
crown of jewels
beautifully done...

Bishop
03-22-2001, 03:36 PM
I see you in the Garden, your beauty beyond compare
and I hear a voice speaking forth from the air
Telling me that its you that i've been looking for
so now I'm opening the door
for you to come in
so that our reign can begin
hand in hand, side by side
throughout eternity we shall abide.

Nita
03-22-2001, 03:36 PM
Thanks for the post Nlover....
Thanks for the luv... :wink:

Nita
03-22-2001, 03:40 PM
How beautiful,....lovin you Bishop babe...

GA_Sunshyne
03-22-2001, 03:42 PM
(i can't get rid of the feeling that
keeps tellin' me that i know you... hmmm)

2 words dear sister...
Simply Beautiful!

Peace&Love...
Sunshyne~

$$RICH$$
03-22-2001, 03:57 PM
AS I FLY MY FRIENDLY FLIGHT
I SEE U MY QUEEN NITA IN SIGHT
IN THE GARDEN OF LOVE
I FLOW FROM ABOVE DOWN 2 LAND
AS I TAKE HOLD OF YO HAND
WE WALK THE SANDS OF BLISS
AND I OFFER U MY SWEETEST KISS
OF GENTLNESS...I LOVE THIS PIECE
VERY SMOOTHLY DONE .

Street So'ja
03-22-2001, 07:01 PM
that was definitely felt by a brotha
this piece is presented was so much class

i feeling you

Nita
03-23-2001, 03:59 AM
Thanks So'ja, $$Rich$$, and GA_S...
Glad you enjoyed this reading because
I enjoy reading you guys too... :heart:

Jam
03-23-2001, 09:53 AM
mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm
(I'm speechless)
u were shining on this piece gurrrlll

j'hiah
03-23-2001, 10:47 AM
i saw you walking
in
the serene garden
with
heaven's dawn around you...
taken from my earthen body
i take a sound view
you
it was destiny that found you...

peace
j'hiah
nfinite from his serene garden....

Nita
03-23-2001, 01:23 PM
:heart:Thanks dnommo, you know I got mad love for you...
thanks for responding..
:heart:Jam, Jam, Jam, what can I say, I'm glad you like
it Bruh...
and Ike...I mean Jehiah..lol:heart: :heart:
This place fit only for a King
Where love can flow free, just like a dream
May I dwell in this garden, forever
Till life itself is no more....

Afridancr
03-23-2001, 01:29 PM
Nita~
Beautiful piece!



Afri

Nita
03-23-2001, 09:03 PM
Thanks guys :kiss:

Nita
03-24-2001, 10:37 PM
No more garden of serenity,
I'm all alone, myself and me
our footprints in the sand,
have all been washed away by the waves
No trace of the love I once knew,
I am alone, in my garden
the lonely queen

Destee
03-25-2001, 05:33 AM
beautiful flow Nita
Gurl you betta put that bikini back on
and get back on that beach!

fo' sumbody get that man

:wink:

Destee

LISTERSCRIBIN'
03-25-2001, 03:12 PM
nita, i am really lovin' this piece...it's beautiful.

alyce
03-25-2001, 11:08 PM
I'm feeling the love up in heah!

This is beautiful, NEEETAA!

:heart:

A

Nita
03-26-2001, 10:22 PM
lmao@Destee....
The queen has returned!

Nita
03-03-2004, 03:19 PM
*jus tryin to shine*

watzinaname
03-03-2004, 06:52 PM
Like everyone said, this piece was so serene. Keep on shining.

Nita
03-04-2004, 01:42 AM
I shall :wink:

the_story
03-04-2004, 04:57 PM
this peice is soo.....great...it is a masterpeice...keep on flowin gurl...ur on of my inspirations....
much love,
-story

Nita
02-14-2006, 09:37 AM
this peice is soo.....great...it is a masterpeice...keep on flowin gurl...ur on of my inspirations....
much love,
-story
thanks little sister...by the way..where r u? Hit a sister up

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