Joyce
10-29-2001, 12:26 AM
Write upon my soul
Poems for a broken woman
You are the Poet.
Copyright © 2001 by Joyce Rogers
Poems for a broken woman
You are the Poet.
Copyright © 2001 by Joyce Rogers
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View Full Version : Haiku : A Broken Woman (Haiku) Joyce 10-29-2001, 12:26 AM Write upon my soul Poems for a broken woman You are the Poet. Copyright © 2001 by Joyce Rogers $$RICH$$ 10-29-2001, 12:32 AM the poet of abroken woman soul writes the final chapter.....haiku gurl u lay it down when u hit !:heart: :kiss: baller 10-29-2001, 08:11 AM In the still of the night I hear you cry out to me In anguish Upset at the many trials Forced upon you by life’s woes Time and time again You cry…asking WHY… Why must I suffer Why must I endure this pain Why must I agonize over the wrongs of others Why? Unanswered Questions Swim in your mist As you think of this And other things Bewildering to you Black Men keeping you down By not being true Black Women pointing fingers Not lifting you up No water for a weary soul Drowning…in an empty cup No shoulder to lean after a disheartening day No caress for ages aches untold No words of comfort that a lover would say No one to care No one to hold …your heart hopelessly helpless you feel as night turns to day turns to night trapped in life’s vicious cycle moving through the passages of time. BLACK WOMEN… …I LOVE YOU. {there are no BROKEN, BLACK WOMEN...only women in waiting.} j'hiah 10-29-2001, 10:49 AM writing on your soul words of wisdom truth and life now queen, you are whole.. Joyce, this is meaningful, beautiful, etc... *haiku classic* Joyce 10-29-2001, 08:44 PM Rich, Rich, Rich! Thank you for your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed the read. I know of no one else on this board that bring delight to a poet's heart, the way you do. You are so dedicated to the craft of writing poetry and to this forum as a moderator. Thanks for all the hours you put in at this forum each week. Keep dem haikus coming. Baller: That is a beautiful poem you scribed. I appreciate your poetic response very much. I have always appreciated your sensivity when you scribe. Maybe we can do another duet. I pick the situation this time...how bout it bro??? j'hiah: Truly you have captured the essence of Haiku. I still remember the way I felt when I read the first Haiku you posted. Usually this style takes a little practice before you are able to touch the soul of another. But this was not the case with you...not at all. Keep scribing my brother...I am enjoying every little bitty line. epiphany 10-29-2001, 10:24 PM It is but a moment of fear when we face the tears of past indiscretions the subliminal thoughts root in our our hearts bringing the spirit low have faith in those times when things aren't so clear and your mind is racked with temptation stay focused on God take your worries to him thru whispers in the wind he'll cleanse you of sin In his word he promised he would a broken woman is just for a moment to appreciate his will for you when you give your heart freely he will never forsake you just hold on.............hes transforming a better you....... Epiphany(C)2001 msluciousb 10-29-2001, 11:08 PM AND THE WORDS WRITTEN FOR THIS WOMAN WHO MADE HALF WHOLE WAS BEAUTY OF THE SOUL:heart: BEAUTIFUL WORK FROM A BEAUTIFUL SPIRIT! j'hiah 10-30-2001, 12:50 AM honestly, had it not been for you i would be posting very very rarely. You starting going bananas with this haiku thing and it became convenient for me. yo i may not write a long poem again :lol: maybe we can hook up on a piece of poetry or sumn' and take this poetry thing to a whole uhva level. thanx for the nspiration, the dunn of poets. Joyce 11-01-2001, 02:28 AM Epiphany, As you probably already know...I love this. Thank you...thank you very much. msluciousb, Thank you so much for such a poetic comment. You certainly have a way with words. j'hiah I would be honored to pair off with you in writing a piece. You pick the subject or I??? dnommo 11-01-2001, 10:39 AM beautiful... this piece i like... alyce 11-01-2001, 10:46 AM ...sometimes we MUST be broken....for God to work a new thing in our lives.... write Poetess....from His mouth to your pen.... thank you a j'hiah 11-01-2001, 12:07 PM my female poetic twin you will ndeed be notified in a very short time. i think this will be a spiritual, wholesome with much healing. blessings bestowed Joyce 11-06-2001, 09:18 AM Thanks Mr. D, glad you enjoyed Ms. A, thanks for sharing a poetic word of wisdom. I always appreciate your insight. Mr. J, I look forward to the moment. When you are ready just put a message up on the instant message thingy and we shall go from there. Amun-Ra 11-06-2001, 09:32 AM I would write there if I had the words, but your thoughts are more appropriate to what I might say, if you said them, then I would know what words to write and which words to say to make it right--Amun-Ra Check out my new column “Dangerous Psychology When We Cheat!” at “http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=4987 N2urSoul 03-10-2002, 03:31 PM wow, I missed this one! Haiku-sational!! :) Joyce 03-25-2002, 10:00 AM Ra: You have a unique way of expression wit dat vocabulary of yoin'. Thanks for the read. Ms N: Thanks for readin'...wit yo witty self :lol: |
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