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Joyce
10-29-2001, 12:26 AM
Write upon my soul
Poems for a broken woman
You are the Poet.








Copyright © 2001 by Joyce Rogers

$$RICH$$
10-29-2001, 12:32 AM
the poet of abroken woman soul
writes the final chapter.....haiku

gurl u lay it down when u hit !:heart: :kiss:

baller
10-29-2001, 08:11 AM
In the still of the night
I hear you cry out to me
In anguish
Upset at the many trials
Forced upon you by life’s woes
Time and time again
You cry…asking

WHY…

Why must I suffer
Why must I endure this pain
Why must I agonize over the wrongs of others
Why?

Unanswered Questions
Swim in your mist
As you think of this
And other things
Bewildering to you
Black Men keeping you down
By not being true
Black Women pointing fingers
Not lifting you up
No water for a weary soul
Drowning…in an empty cup
No shoulder to lean after a disheartening day
No caress for ages aches untold
No words of comfort that a lover would say
No one to care
No one to hold
…your heart

hopelessly helpless
you feel
as
night
turns
to
day
turns
to
night
trapped in life’s vicious cycle
moving through the passages of time.

BLACK WOMEN…
…I LOVE YOU.

{there are no BROKEN, BLACK WOMEN...only women in waiting.}

j'hiah
10-29-2001, 10:49 AM
writing on your soul
words of wisdom truth and life
now queen, you are whole..

Joyce,
this is meaningful, beautiful, etc...
*haiku classic*

Joyce
10-29-2001, 08:44 PM
Rich, Rich, Rich! Thank you for your kind comments.
Glad you enjoyed the read. I know of no one else on this board that bring delight to a poet's heart, the way you do. You are so dedicated to the craft of writing poetry and to this forum as a moderator. Thanks for all the hours you put in at this forum each week. Keep dem haikus coming.

Baller: That is a beautiful poem you scribed. I appreciate your poetic response very much. I have always appreciated your sensivity when you scribe. Maybe we can do another duet. I pick the situation this time...how bout it bro???

j'hiah: Truly you have captured the essence of Haiku. I still remember the way I felt when I read the first Haiku you posted. Usually this style takes a little practice before you are able to touch the soul of another. But this was not the case with you...not at all. Keep scribing my brother...I am enjoying every little bitty line.

epiphany
10-29-2001, 10:24 PM
It is but a moment of fear
when we face the tears
of past indiscretions
the subliminal thoughts
root in our our hearts
bringing the spirit low
have faith in those times
when things aren't so clear
and your mind is racked with
temptation
stay focused on God
take your worries to him
thru whispers in the wind
he'll cleanse you of sin
In his word he promised he would
a broken woman
is just for a moment
to appreciate his will for you
when you give your heart freely
he will never forsake you
just hold on.............hes transforming

a better you.......


Epiphany(C)2001

msluciousb
10-29-2001, 11:08 PM
AND THE WORDS WRITTEN FOR THIS
WOMAN WHO MADE HALF WHOLE
WAS BEAUTY OF THE SOUL:heart: BEAUTIFUL WORK FROM A BEAUTIFUL SPIRIT!

j'hiah
10-30-2001, 12:50 AM
honestly, had it not been for you i would be posting very very rarely.
You starting going bananas with this haiku thing and it became convenient for me.
yo i may not write a long poem again :lol:

maybe we can hook up on a piece of poetry or sumn' and take this poetry thing to a whole uhva level.

thanx for the nspiration,
the dunn of poets.

Joyce
11-01-2001, 02:28 AM
Epiphany,

As you probably already know...I love this. Thank you...thank you very much.

msluciousb,

Thank you so much for such a poetic comment. You certainly have a way with words.

j'hiah

I would be honored to pair off with you in writing a piece. You pick the subject or I???

dnommo
11-01-2001, 10:39 AM
beautiful...

this piece i like...

alyce
11-01-2001, 10:46 AM
...sometimes we MUST be broken....for God to work a new thing in our lives....

write Poetess....from His mouth to your pen....

thank you

a

j'hiah
11-01-2001, 12:07 PM
my female poetic twin

you will ndeed be notified in a very short time.

i think this will be a spiritual, wholesome with much healing.


blessings bestowed

Joyce
11-06-2001, 09:18 AM
Thanks Mr. D, glad you enjoyed


Ms. A, thanks for sharing a poetic word of wisdom. I always appreciate your insight.

Mr. J, I look forward to the moment. When you are ready just put a message up on the instant message thingy and we shall go from there.

Amun-Ra
11-06-2001, 09:32 AM
I would write there if I had the words, but your thoughts are more appropriate to what I might say, if you said them, then I would know what words to write and which words to say to make it right--Amun-Ra

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N2urSoul
03-10-2002, 03:31 PM
wow, I missed this one!

Haiku-sational!! :)

Joyce
03-25-2002, 10:00 AM
Ra: You have a unique way of expression wit dat vocabulary of
yoin'. Thanks for the read.

Ms N: Thanks for readin'...wit yo witty self :lol:

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