U ASKED BOUT DA REVOLUTION......

THE REVOLUTION LIKE GILL SCOTT HERON SAID
WONT BE TELIVISED LIKE BLAKS DAT END UP DEAD
WE SIT UP AND AIMLESSLY GRIPE N COMPLAIN
BUT WE REFUSE TO VOTE AGAIN N AGAIN
WHEN WE GO TO FIGHT WAR WE LOSE LIFE
SIT AT HOME SAYIN WUT AINT RIGHT
WE TRY TO EMACIPATE BEINGS WHO RETALIATE
NOT KNOWIN DA CHAIN REACTION 1 COOD CREATE
EACH ONE TEACH 1 BUT WE LAUGH AT IGNORANCE
DESTROYIN; PROGRESS DIGRESSES BACK SIX PENCE
WE PAY TAXES Y NOT SEE N HAVE A SAY WHERE IT GOES
CITY HALL MEETINGS MOST CONSTITUENTS DONT GO
I POSE DEEP QUESTIONS
TIRED OF MILLENIUM DEPRESSION
2 KEEP IT SHORT N BRIEF
CHANGE STARTS WIT I N BENEFITS MORE THAN ME
DONT TALK GET INVOLVED IN YA COMMUNITY
BLESSED TO HAVE MORE POSITIVE MOMENTS
THATS MORE TIME LIKE MONEY JUST SPENT
WE EMBELISH DA TRUTHS ..... 2 B CONT'D......STAY TUNED

dope now get away from the rhyming and use line breaks. Have stanza it alows you to breath. Rhyming is cool when you trying to rap not all poetry rhymes. Its about the wording and what you are saying. Convay your message to your audience and make them feel your words.

awesome flow u took me there fo real keep doing it !!!

awaiting the continue of this joint .