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danni0518
08-01-2006, 11:15 PM
Hard for me to breathe
Needing
Missing You
And Your warmth
Love
Affection
Where are You
What happened
Have I lost yet again
Been winning for the longest
Guess my luck
Changed
I guess
Amazing
How Your essence remains
Intriguing
How I continue thinking of You
Not trying
Unwilling
Just don’t **** wanna
Give up
So much time,
Effort,
Potential
So much potential
Losing my mind
Already lost my heart
No sleep
Losing weight
You win some
Lose others,
Which did I do
I had a plan
They say black folks aren’t too good with plans
I’d have to agree
Am I a fool because
I am not willing to lose
Again
Same scenario, different person
Is it,
Naw, it couldn’t be
Me
Alone, struggling
This wasn’t part of the plan
Too determined not to win
This game
Too stubborn to
Listen
To my head
Heart doesn’t matter
Couldn’t, shouldn’t matter
Can’t make decisions
Unable to think
Straight
I believe
In love
Happily ever after
I still believe
In us
But
It’s just so **** hard for me to breathe
So
Hard
To
Breathe

$$RICH$$
08-02-2006, 03:05 AM
welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
welcome to the house of peace & respect
welcome from above as i bless this some love

felt every drop of this piece tyte flow again welcome within
ya kin now so flow head on ! danni0518

:new: :wave:

soulful2006
08-02-2006, 12:00 PM
beautiful flow I love how you wrote it just as if the feeling was still rising in you it gives the piece new life and it reads as if I can hear you saying it. it a refreshing taleent and I hope to hear more from you.

danni0518
08-02-2006, 10:18 PM
Thanx for the love. I'm just becoming able to vent and it feels good to know that my feelings are well comprehended.:coffee:

queentswana
08-03-2006, 08:00 AM
Danni...
Welcome to our home, relax, enjoy..cause it's your home too.
I enjoyed reading and can very well relate...
thanks for sharing a part of your soul with us.

4EVERLUV
08-05-2006, 07:22 PM
danni:
I really luv this piece. I thought I was
the only one that ever felt this way.
Nice to know Im not alone.:)
Awesone write. Keep it flowing sista

Much luv

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