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choclatangel
08-01-2006, 06:32 PM
Peaches n creamin Rican
leaking the fluid that gives life
Always heat seeking with your missile
But the honey pot is now cold
No longer your home
Your games have grown so old
That my tongue is now bold
I put no thoughts on hold
Rippin into your tissues
Every single time I diss you
Knowing what I know now
I will never even miss you
You couldn't be faithful
Didn't know the word commitment
And my monthly body cleansing is late so
The seed that you so freely spilled at will
Will bring something beautiful into this world
A human being whose heart beats
And has feelings, hopes, and dreams
So before you tell me '"it's" not yours' again
No more words from your sorry mouth
Just get the hell out of my house!

$$RICH$$
08-02-2006, 03:07 AM
whoaaaa!!!! u told it str8 and kept it real
word up !

choclatangel
08-02-2006, 09:58 AM
Yeah brother Rich, this was a hard one for me to write. I wanted to say so much more but couldn't find a 'nice' way to put it. But I had to lay down my feelings about this situation.

sweettee29
08-02-2006, 11:15 PM
i felt power behind this piece well well written and raw truth sistah

much much love sweettee29

4EVERLUV
08-05-2006, 07:34 PM
choclatangel:
Say it then sista choclateangel

Much luv

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