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$$RICH$$
07-23-2006, 06:17 PM
Inside the middle soul
where something has pitted cold
i fancied myself immune
to all the uncertainties of infatuation
caught in the mist of being lost
somehow paying the cost
from the slumbering puberty
like da last tyme in my mind
i endured such deep confrontation

But every time i close my eyes
not no more them a moment of time
all i can envision is you in my mind
the beauty and love ummm so fine
i know thy fate still in shine
but somewhere inside i'm dying
i would not have pose such hope
if i would have know i'll hang from da rope
loop in the maze dat got me daze

I've abandon myself at the whims of emotion
yet i have this deep desire and compassion
as i state my claim inside this confession
under commanding love i offer thee & obsession
through my soulful affection
i so loveth thee , u be one magnificent prize
unto me and upon my eyez
i'm no lie nor an illusion , my love is real
and what i feel lives inside da fate of our destiny
rose of rapture and love
i vow thy promise that we are and will be
ya da queen for me at the sight of God's eyez.

Thy confession of truth pt.II (next)

soulful2006
07-23-2006, 11:25 PM
I've been here before and the feelin is stronger thatn the will of the individual and it feels like I can't breathe for the thought of what took me so long to realize I was nto immune to the things I could not see coming and this type of drowning that feels so good is so cativating that i couldn't let the feeling or the person go. You touched on so many of the things that I feel everyday that it almost brings a tear to my eye and its such a blessing to be one so fortunate as to be chosen to embrace Love's Intoxication in the way that so few have. I thank you for this.

spicybrown
07-23-2006, 11:35 PM
Oh $$RICH$$. I absolutely love the way you confessed in the form of amor on papyrus:blush: If anything I'll give this one:

4:spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar:

4 stars in motion
for this sycker than syck poetic "love potion"

:picture:

:kiss:

$$RICH$$
07-23-2006, 11:37 PM
Most welcome and yes sometime what's pitted deep inside that feels
so good and intoxicated can take u deep and fast that will leave a feeling
inside that will have you lost.

Thankz soulful2006 for the love and visit within my space of realism

$$RICH$$
07-23-2006, 11:39 PM
ahhh yes spicybrown da confession speaks out happy u can relate
to where my heart was pointing to....Thank you my dear for the love & visit

sweettee29
07-24-2006, 04:15 PM
$$RICH$$ SUGA YOU HAVE ME IN A DAZE OF YOUR EMOTIONS.TO HAVE A FEELING SUCH AS THIS IS TRULY A GIFT BECAUSE YOU HAVE ABSOLUTLY INVADED MY THOUGHTS, AND MY SOUL I REALLY DO THINK YOU ARE SNEAKING INTO MY DREAMS AND VISIONS THIS WAS A FANTASTIC WRITE I LOVE IT SUGA I DO

MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29

4EVERLUV
07-25-2006, 02:35 AM
They say confession is good for the soul
And here you sit baring yours
All I want to do is hold you
And not say one word
Just let my heart speak
Caress you ever so sweetly
You are as special as special can be to me
Please accept my apology
I know you never intended to hurt me
I am lifted to a new height
Everything will be alright:kiss1:

$$RICH$$ this piece is ever so beautiful.

$$RICH$$
07-25-2006, 03:14 AM
sweettee honey it's known that i am the dream catcher
and a wish master next time you close your eyez it will
be i that enters . Thank you my dear...............................


4EVERLUV did you feel me and heard thy confession
of realism and truth forth that i am , as pt 2 will reveal
all one's mind wonders stay tune and thankz for the love
and warm visit .

4EVERLUV
07-25-2006, 03:31 AM
$$RICH$$,
Felt every word. Im going to
start bringing the kleenex to the computer
you keep wettn' my eyez
Its all good though.

Your ever so welcome my dear heart.

$$RICH$$
07-26-2006, 01:22 AM
likewise 4EVERLUV............

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