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sweettee29
07-19-2006, 09:11 PM
thank you for reading while it was posted

asimplepoet
07-19-2006, 09:54 PM
Did I not play wifey the way you like
Did I not cater to your every need
Did I not give you all that I had to give
Did I not conform to your expectations
Did I not change inside and out for you
Did I not lose me inside your idea of me

Yet it did not completely satisfy you
Yet it did not keep you home at night
Yet it did not make you love me right
Yet it did not make you faitful and true
Yet it did not commit you totally to me
Yet it did not make us happily ever after

Definitely have been in the situation where I did what i had to do and it still wasn't enough. Excellent flo cuz.

$$RICH$$
07-19-2006, 10:22 PM
deeply felt
if i can only change the maze
i would cater to your needs
be the man to please
shower u in compassion
make it be everlasting

feeling you on this fo real been there my self just twisted around

4EVERLUV
07-20-2006, 02:06 AM
Really feeln' this drop. flo on poet

sweet apple*pie
07-20-2006, 06:12 PM
dear friend, I have been, in this position
til one night, the Lord brought me a vision
for the man I onced loved, you see
Had assasinated me, verbally; emotionaly

I overcompensated, jumped hoops, still defeated
He would sex my body, and leave my mind so depleted
The Lord made it so, I had no choice, but to go
gave us time, seperated, so that we could grow.

Two years went by, he called me, we got back together
Untrusting at first, the Lord suficed me, during the stormy weather
"Don't know a good thing, til' it's gone, now thats fact
Keep workin on you, sweeteee, bet he'll come runnin' back

spicybrown
07-20-2006, 08:00 PM
Beautiful flow, sweettee29, and nice flowback asimplepoet:spinstar:

:picture:

sweettee29
07-20-2006, 10:24 PM
ASIMPLEPOET LOVED YOUR FLO AND YOUR WORDS MUCH LOVE

RICH LOVE AS USUAL THANK YOU, YOU ALWAYS KNOW JUST WHAT TO SAY

4EVERLOVE THANKYOU AS WELL I APPRECIATE ALL YOUR SUPPORT

AND MRS SWEET APPLE PIE MAN THOSE WORDS COULD NOT HAVE BEEN TRUER AND THATS REAL THANK YOU

SPICEB THANKYOU GIRL MUCH MUCH LOVE

$$RICH$$
08-07-2006, 10:14 PM
likewise sis likewise dear

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