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soulful2006
07-07-2006, 11:09 PM
I swear I never meant it
to come off like i was trying to
seduce you that night
i was trying to get reacquainted
with an old friend
i never wanted to see you as an old flame
I just wanted to chill
i never thought that the night would become so
heated
But I couldn't sit there and look into the same eyes that i fell
in love with four years ago
And feel absolutely nothing
I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN FROM THE CONVERSATION
I SHOULDN'T HAVE ASKED YOU TO SIT NEXT TO ME
I should have seen it right there in my apartment
I couldn't resist the temptation of the beauty that is your soul
The one man who could have me at any time
I don't know why I tried in the first palce
the song we can't be friends is so true
because I can't see or hear you without falling in love with you
you are engaged and she is so beautiful
She doesn't deserve this and
The thing is you don't really want me but we did what we did
As much as I love you you can't be with me because she needs you
More


To be continued...................

4EVERLUV
07-07-2006, 11:19 PM
Nice scribe soulful. Can't wait to hear the rest.

Much Luv

$$RICH$$
07-07-2006, 11:54 PM
oh my my my !!
temptation and feeling crossing into one heated night

love to hear the rest of this whewwwwww

soulful2006
07-08-2006, 12:43 AM
i can't really wait to tell the rest

soulful2006
07-29-2006, 07:40 AM
part two is complete

spicybrown
07-29-2006, 09:51 AM
Nice writes Soulful2006:spinstar:

:picture:

samson4real
07-30-2006, 12:30 PM
THE GREAT ONE WILL ALWAYS BE THE GREAT ONE,GREAT TO THE PERSON THAT FORGIVE AND FORGET SOME ONE BAD ACT FOR THEY ARE HERO AND THEY SHALL BE CALL THE WISE ONE.
AM A GREAT SINNER DOES NOT MEAN THAT I WILL DIE IN SIN HOPE AND BELIEVE IN GOD WHAT EVER YOU WANT SHALL GET TO YOU.BECAUSE ONE DAY YOU WILL GIVE ACCOUNT OF YOUR WORK.
PLEASE MY BROTHER AND SISTER BE YOUR BROTHER KEEPER AND BE HAPPY THAT YOU ARE BLACK,FOR BEENING A BLACK IS A GREAT HAPPINESS TO ME.AM PROUD TO BE A BLACK.FOR GOD KNOWS THE REASON HE CREATED YOU AS BLACK.ONE LOVE MY PEOPLE
PEACE OUT

SAMSON4REAL

soulful2006
07-31-2006, 01:13 AM
thank you for the positive response and the love you're sharing I'm glad that your first post was a response to this poem. welcome to the destee family and God Bless you.

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