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Joyce
09-27-2001, 09:40 PM
Toilet paper love...
Pooped and peeped on frequently.
No more rolls for me.







From the "I Haiku You" series

Copyright 2001 © by Joyce Rogers

$$RICH$$
09-27-2001, 11:16 PM
I sit on one place
with no wipe
can't ya gotcha!

flow on sis...............:D

Joyce
11-03-2001, 03:12 AM
This is one of my lighter Haikus. Thanks for your humorous reflection.

onzhay
11-03-2001, 11:42 AM
this was too cute and funny. just what i needed this morning. i see i'm not the only one who experiences the lack of t-paper when its most needed.

zhay

cocobutterskyn
11-03-2001, 04:18 PM
I received 2 views from this, funny and sad. I wonder if anyone else did? I love reading the Haiku Queen.:heart:

Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
CCBSKYN

Joyce
11-03-2001, 08:51 PM
Funny and SAD!!! I wrote this in hopes that the person who finds themselves in this situation will gather the strength to stop being pooped and peeped on when it comes to love.

Glad you like the Haiku.

$$RICH$$
11-03-2001, 11:23 PM
sometime love don't see at all
just sit there wit no whipes

Hunter
11-03-2001, 11:58 PM
Dayuummmmmm.... u know I had to read this one out loud to my womenfriends;) !!

this schitt should be printed on T-shirts...

let the caption read..."TOILET PAPER LOVE..NO MORE ROLLS FOR ME!!"

I LOVED THIS ONE J....

*tight-panties*

epiphany
11-05-2001, 04:25 AM
Even with a kind and giving heart You just have
to know when enough is enough
this was a good one, I liked the metaphor....I can visualize it,
cause thats how you really feel, be it love or friendship....well done.


epiphany :heart:

j'hiah
11-05-2001, 07:47 PM
haiku queen,

as always- tyte.

Amun-Ra
11-06-2001, 09:23 AM
Now--that one wiped me out! I am smiling today--good--Amun-Ra

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Da Street So'ja
11-06-2001, 09:49 AM
SOMETIMES YOU JUST CAN'T TAKE NO MORE

YA KNOW

>DSSNY<

msluciousb
11-06-2001, 10:38 AM
I loved this Haiku, though not all to familiar with the form itself.
I do attempt to immulate those I admire who seemed to have
mastered the art of simple abundance! Loved it.......makes me
want to say ya know"**** or get off the pot!"
Blessings on Ya House!

N2urSoul
03-10-2002, 03:29 PM
moving to a new home ... :)

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