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View Full Version : Black Poetry : Comfort Zone: ErAdIcAtIoN


Eisha
03-29-2006, 11:49 AM
A comfort zone that
can bring discomfort around
insecurity

The security
protecting the comfort is
a tough flexed mission

Blocks the barracade
of an unwanted subject;
ErAdIcAtIoN

$$RICH$$
03-30-2006, 02:18 AM
Maze within zoning
comforting in a deep freeze
cold tasty feeling

Eisha
04-05-2006, 11:45 AM
the coldness felt to
feel the deep warmness conquer
all that is harmful

$$RICH$$
04-05-2006, 05:04 PM
Under every turn
sit hope from the deep coldness
what seem harmful,not

abstract219
04-19-2006, 08:18 PM
Great write...I love the 5-7-5 X 3 formula you used..very inventive...ive been trying that myself...great write, Poet.

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