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Dlovely
12-21-2005, 04:37 PM
You don't always show it,
but I know that you care.

You My friend
If I'd ever need you,
I know you'd be there.

You I'm glad you're my friend.
Your smile makes me smile.
Your pain makes me hurt.

You My friend
I want you to know:
If you need me--I'm there.
make you happy,
make you laugh.

You My friend
Sometimes you make me mad,
but I can't stay mad.

You My friend
Sometimes I want to get away from you.
And sometimes there's nothing I want more than:
to talk to you,
to tell you about my day,
to hear about yours,
to laugh with you,
to tease you,
to share an inside joke,
that no one else would get,
to argue with you,
but know we're just kidding..

You My friend
Do you remember the time when...?
There are so many times.

You My friend
Don't ever lose the wonderful person you are.
Stay happy.
Stay healthy.
Stay you.

You My friend
I'll never stop being your friend.
Don't ever stop being mine.

You My friend
Just wanted to tell you:
I care.

$$RICH$$
12-22-2005, 12:07 AM
a very nice poetic spray of a true friend
great poem

Dlovely
12-22-2005, 01:51 AM
thks $$RICH$$

nevar
12-22-2005, 04:50 AM
this is some kind of friend enjoyed the flow, flo poet.:star: :nuts:

$$RICH$$
02-21-2006, 06:45 PM
most welcome keep doing what u do Dlovely

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