my friend can't be my friend no moe ... i shole miss her. i wanna go see 'bout her. she just live up the road awaze ... she got kids an' stuff, i love them chiren ... jes' like my own. jes' wanna check on 'em see if'n they alrite. last time i seen'd her, he wuz there ... she told me she got new friends now, don't need me no moe ... wit her arm wrapp'd roun' him ... like she dun wun a prize ... she shole iz proud, too proud i say ... look like having a man mean so much to her ... she alwaze been thata way ... Lawd now that chile luv her some man! ... <smiling> ... <sighing> ... anywaze ... i gotta respect what she said. i aint goin back over there ... less'n she 'vite me

folk been talk'n doe ... say he beat'n on her again. whoop'n her e'ry day. what can i do ... nuth'n. i 'member last time he whoop'd her, when we wuz still friends an' stuff ... she came an' stay'd here wit me an' da chiren ... she heal'd up so nice ... got back fat an' fine ... my friend shole iz pretty ... but then he came back talk'n 'bout how sorry he was ... brung'd some new thangz for her an' da babies, toys an' such ... they wuz happy to see dey "daddy" ... dey all went home together ... he say she can't be my friend no moe ... folk say she rite poe look'n agin ... she shole used ta like my fried chicken an' tata salad ... Lawd now that chile shole kood eat when she want'd to! ... <smiling> ... <sighing> ... guess it's best for me to jest mine my bizness.

i shole love my friend an' miss her ...
i reck'n she know she kin 'pend on me if'n she need me ...

nuth'n else i kin do

cept'n pray

I love hearing you speak in the vernacular, my dear. This is a wonderful form you've adopted. Very soulful, thoughtful ~ sending the best message out to us all.

Thank you,

S

"THIRD" this motion? Destee, this is what it's about! Send a message; TEACH! I also enjoy reading/hearing you speak in the way we be doin!

:)

A

Thank You All !!! :heart:

I was surprised to receive this flow. Wasn't looking for it. Sorta kinda shocked that it presented itself. It was so easy. Truly a *natural* flow. Thank you for the encouragement!

:)

Destee

I appreciate this page you've provided; this flow...

and I love the message here.

Thank you for sharing

T

we often lend a helping hand
out to those who most need it

but if they reject the hand
we offer, then what are we
supposed to do for them except
pray all day everyday

itz gonna be alright

T - Please make yourself at home here, because you are at home. Thanks for the encouragement.

Dnommo - Thank You!!! Wow. Thanks a bunch! :)

PoeticDelight - Thanks Sis for the read and response. Yes, you're right. Itz gonna be alrite. :)

Sometimes I read a poem and it feels like you know my story!
The details may be somewhat different and some of the parts not as gory! But It is still the same story!
Sometimes I go to a read just for the title and leave that page changed and rearranged forever, I just clicked the mouse three
pages over , to find an answer that I traveled 500 miles to find.
Thank you Poets for sometime readin my mind!
Sometimes there is nothing you can do but PRAY!

BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:peace: :peace:

DON'T KNOW HOW MANY AAAAMENS
IS ALLOWED BUT THIS DESERVES
AMEN- AMEN- AMEN-AMEN-AMEN

Sister Destee
You rekn den did a flow
I aint never dun seen this
Pray own Sister
She will pull through whatever
The Lord hears ya

wow.....thy prayer will be heard
just pray for the good will and hope
keep praying

yep when there's despair there's prayer!!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:

Destee, I think you missed your true calling
I absolutely LOVE this...I sure hope this "spirit"
visits you again 'cause I would love to read more.
Those resigned <smiles> and <sighs> speak volumes

Much Peace ~

Hhhmmm, let me think about this. The work was good...too good to not be true, or just some stuff flowin from you...so I guess the only thing left to say is, God bless her and you're right to pray.

Thanks for the rare work Lady !!!

Hotep

Soll wuz guod ta heah wutchall dun did fo dat chil. She b needen ah guod frin lack uons. I'z b prayin fo heh too. U no da Laud gon bless u 2, keep on b n dat angle chil. hope she b doin betta wit heah main doh, dat neggah aut not b whoopin dat child lack dat. dat fooo needs his azze whooped fo dat.

Ase`