alyce
03-18-2001, 08:27 PM
When you come to me like the first rays of sun,
your light
envelops my body
warms my soul
melts my heart
dries my tears;
and like the soft, sleeping petals of the morning glory,
I open
Alyce, 1999
Destee
03-18-2001, 08:40 PM
someone else said it ...
no matter what the flow
if it belongs to Alyce
it's sensuous
go 'head gurl!
everybody aint able
Destee
j'hiah
03-18-2001, 10:41 PM
you say in a few poetic lines
what poets bust the brain cells tryin' to xpress...
Alyce (pretty name)
you are the best female poet my eyes have ever read on the face of the internet....seriously....
keep it up
in admiration and awe
j'hiah
nfinite from his serene garden
saleem
03-18-2001, 11:25 PM
This is your signature piece, for true. Thank you for bringing it here for us to feel, and get yet another glimpse of 'you'.
s
Heartbeat
03-19-2001, 08:37 AM
...the soft, sleeping petals of the morning glory.
Write the words Poet...write the words!
BE
alyce
03-19-2001, 08:26 PM
is most special; it pleases me that you feel it, because this is how he moves throughout the whole of my being ~ it's truly all about the lover of my heart/mind/body/soul.
And jh, you know you put me in a terrible bind. You are far too kind, my brother. I offer my humble thanks for such high praise...
Peace and blessings,
A
jazzymoonchild
07-07-2004, 07:55 PM
Alyce,
This was as pretty as a flower petal
watzinaname
07-07-2004, 10:31 PM
I agree with jazzymoonchild, this blossomed like a garden.
MzBlkAngel
07-08-2004, 08:45 AM
just like a morning flower this was very nice read....Angel
deepy
07-15-2004, 11:21 AM
that blend of nature...naturally
...so nice...sweet and warm...
i like the way you write