i had a dream about you ...
your sweet presence did make it shake
now i know the pleasure of a gentle earthquake
so much more than the gentleman i thought you would be
my body cried when it felt you in the same room with me
it's so rare that i dream a dream to remember
my mind knew, hold it tight and do not surrender
eyes opening slowly to the start of a flow
pouring out of me so that you too could know
capturing this moment to share it with you
finna go back to sleep for a minute or two

This is very nice ~ been here!

And thank you for opening this lounge. You do know what's up! I appreciate that.


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Hi Saleem,

Wish I could take credit for our new lounge, but the idea
came from another Member. They hit the nail on the head huh?

Thanks for the read.

:)

Destee

i'll follow this one up 2morrow,
this is my song here....

j'hiah
writing in his serene garden

J'hiah, thanks for the read ... looking forward to hearing your song :heart:

Kemetstry, i didn't think you'd mind :wink:
thanks for reading :heart:

This is very sensual. Even going within the boundaries of not being too risque'. I like it,.......

so beautiful and when u dream of the gentle notions
u lock it all into a memory where as u can tell the story
but do go back and rest coz again i shall be .....very sweet

wonder-full indeed, madam destee ....words scribe'd in soul-filled pleasure...da dream'a life...

Beautiful peace.....I mos def love to dream!!!

Respect
~Malicious~;)

had a dream about your voice...lol...sista u need to be on many records your speaking voice is lava ......but u know this ...nice :roll: :roll: drop

volcanic heat rocks baby

I'm diggin dis piece



keep it flowing with yo heavenlyness sistah

cypher on

love 360

-lowkey

wow ... somebody's been in the poetry closet ... :wink:

Haaaaaaaaaay Brother Tha HookupMan !!! ... you know all you gotta do is hook a Sista up !!!! hehehe

awwwwwww ... thank you so much for the kind words ... :blush:

Thanks everyone for posting to this thread, that i didn't already thank!

I Love This Family !!!!! :love:

:heart:

Destee

Hello and Welcome and Thank You Lowkey !!!! :)

Please join us in voice chat ... okay ?? ...

just walk right on in the door ... www.destee.com/chat ...

:heart:

Destee

Now, if I had a dream like that, I'd want to go back to sleep for more than just a few...This was awfully sweet. So, when will you write another piece?

Thank You Sister Watz ... you're so kind ... :love:

i don't know when i'm going to write again ... seems such a luxury, writing poetry

because i'm not a poet, like so many of the Family Members here ...

i gotta almost chisel each thought out in stone ...

so it takes me a long time to finish a peace ... :cry:

but i'll try to begin putting something together soon ...

'cause i surely have lots on my mind i could share!

Thanks again for the love!

:heart:

Destee

Dang Sis!

This is sweet and beautiful!!!!
Now Sis, I know you already
share so much of yourself
in many other ways but
your words are never tiring!!!
You drop something for us
real soon now!!!!!! :grouphug:

Love your poetic side!!!!! :heart:

She was dreaming about the coming of me....the one and only...Monetary...in 2001. :D

So, back up and give her fiddy feet. :lol:

Nice piece, my WildFlower *pluck*. :wink: :D

:toast:

As you lay with your back to me
Our best days history...

Tell me I'm wrong ~

destee......

aww this was beautifull
an intemate Piece to....

write ...

and let youre heart speak...


i know........


i ,ve experianced it to........

the dream...
not just one of those dreams...

its different..
its real....



I hope youres is alreay alive....
and touchble..
i think it is....
cause i think someone here revealed itself...
i wish you love sis:heart:





Hold gods hand and walk with him......




Aurora:flowers:send

i love this....I have a poem of this sort, however...my alarm clock awoke me

Girl let me find out...lol

I really really loved this Destee. Short and so intricate with feeling.. whoa, imma have to toot your horn, you're a great poet

keep writin...