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BlakDestiny
10-16-2005, 09:47 AM
Is it personal
An individual thing?

Or is it an illusion
No end or beginning

When you lose the will
To participate
When you feel minimum love
And maximum hate

And…when hope returns
How is life earned?

What is real, what is true?
Do you return to life?
Or does life return to you?

PL

$$RICH$$
10-17-2005, 01:35 AM
this was outstanding and deep question

on life and who what and where i love it
A+ flow don't change one word awesome
poet !!!!!

Desert Storm
10-29-2005, 10:51 PM
above all guard your heart for out of it flows the issues of life.... been feeling this completely lately... It's a lost feeling.... but it you don't return you you don't return to hope. Hope is hard to kill. You need hope to stay chill. Nah whatta mean? So anywayz. I liked this because it was simple and straight to the point. Blessings

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