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nevar
10-10-2005, 09:04 PM
As we lay I wonder if I made a mistake by being here
Since you chose not to keep us near
I wonder why we are wasting each other time
Since our flow seems not to rhyme
When we make love it sometimes seems dry
When we arguing I'm yelling out I wish you die
Baby you know we can't carry on this way
I think we grown apart till we have nothing to say
I love you hate
You go I wait
I cry you sigh
You drink I get high
See how were not on the same cord
I like chevy you a Ford
As we lay i turn to watch our dreams fade away
For us to ponder this we have another day

$$RICH$$
10-10-2005, 11:39 PM
sometime to divide bring equal
a whole from the friction

well felt scribe kinda make one wonder when life is twisted .

queentswana
10-11-2005, 01:14 AM
Life is too short, to not get the fullest of everything. If the end has come..accept it and move on, you both will cherrish it in the long run.

nevar
10-11-2005, 10:21 PM
i appreciate the words it so hard to let go of something so wrong

$$RICH$$
10-11-2005, 11:24 PM
we get in the mix of what is at times
i feel ya yes sometime it's hard to let go
even when it's wrong !

nevar
10-12-2005, 01:30 AM
yep your rite youngblood

$$RICH$$
10-19-2005, 07:46 PM
tru dat indeed .............keep flowing as i'm enjoying

nevar
10-19-2005, 08:19 PM
rich i'm noticing that you give kinds words to people who post. i will say this i appreciate any times someone view but even better when reply. thnks for the support.:kiss2:

nevar
12-18-2005, 03:40 AM
rich just wanted to say your a fine man as i reminscence on this piece. since the day i first started. no matter who you are you still give a positive comment. thanks for the acknowledgement. whew there:spinstar: :ilu:

Tantrum
12-18-2005, 12:32 PM
Yes dont paunder on the past
The future is to bright
I love this flow
Beautiful Sista Nevar

nevar
12-18-2005, 12:47 PM
thanks for the love shown.:spinstar:

spicybrown
12-18-2005, 07:10 PM
Hey, Nevar.....we know that a conflicting love can be soul-stirring. I like this one:spinstar:

nevar
12-22-2005, 04:42 AM
thanks for the love spicy!!!!!!!!!!!:star:

cursed heart
01-14-2006, 01:01 PM
Wow! I felt this one.
Good piece nevar

nevar
01-15-2006, 09:23 AM
thanks for the love shown flow on poet.:kiss1:

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