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deepy
09-20-2005, 01:23 PM
I met this brother
on the train and bought his book
he is self published

learned a lot of things
printing on line and selling
bought his poetry...

i share a haiku
with his permission i do
told him bout destee


too

backpain by blue:

SENIOR CITIZENS
WEARING SHOES WITH VELCRO STRAPS...

RHEUMATISM HURTS!

watzinaname
09-20-2005, 08:32 PM
Your experience made me smile deepy, thanks for sharing it, love the haiku.

One thing hurts worse than
back pain, and that is a tooth
with an exposed nerve

$$RICH$$
09-20-2005, 10:57 PM
painfully indepth
flicked junction ware to cause
black tears of year age

deepy
09-21-2005, 01:20 AM
a tooth with an exposed nerve
the thought makes me cringe
tis beyond the back.....!


oooooh watz....

$$RICH$$
09-21-2005, 02:33 AM
slump ova again
posed sad structure back hurting
like a twisted knot

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