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iwannabe
09-01-2005, 04:35 AM
Sorry but
Even a saint can catch a case.
I'm no saint but hey-
I've seen angels in a rage, with a demons face.
How does this equate you say?
This relates because ;
I'm begging for forgiveness.
If you just give this
To me
I promise I'll never be
That person again.

$$RICH$$
09-01-2005, 05:00 AM
this poem speaks from heart
fitting for forgiveness structured nice
don't change a line ....very nice

Lloyd
09-03-2005, 04:37 PM
I like it but....what about next?Yes u apologize,but have u been forgive?If not,if u don't have a second chance,that means the person ain't worthy of ur love cuz it comes from the bottom of ur heart.In life we shoulde be radical!!!

Wisdom7
09-03-2005, 04:39 PM
Nice poem Iwannabe, there is definately strength in humility

Poetrymama
09-12-2005, 07:32 AM
Wannabee, Have you ever heard of the saying " not to Forgive is not To Live"
Excellent! :dance1: :hearts1: :great: :lift:

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