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Wisdom7
08-25-2005, 05:17 AM
Restless mind
Broken vow
Tell me beloved
Who's harmed u now

Your echoing cries
Unlock my dorr
You're hurting I see
Please tell me more

I've watched u stride
With the grace of a swan
Now stiff and careful
Please do.. go on

Where's the smile
Of a rich man's prize
Why closed lids
On sparkling eyes

A fool you are not
Nor were u born
You have lost nothing
Yet u still mourn

A voice of comfort
A love song I'll sing
I will hold u
My Nubian king

Surrender beloved
Then you'll find
The woman of you're dreams
Is not far behind

Alkebulan
08-25-2005, 07:16 PM
a soothing & thot provoking ode 2 luv :love:

nicely done.

thanks

Wisdom7
08-25-2005, 07:26 PM
Thank you Alkebulan, it was pushed to the bottom so I didn't think I'd get a read. I'm glad u liked it.

watzinaname
08-25-2005, 09:56 PM
The chase is over, when you simply surrender to love. I enjoyed this scribe poet.

$$RICH$$
08-26-2005, 02:00 AM
given in to what holds da heart .......love that is
very nicely done and said

Wisdom7
08-26-2005, 04:13 AM
Thank you Watsinaname and $Rich$!
Love is a powerful thing :hearts1:

Earftones
09-02-2005, 12:28 AM
Nicely done
Peace

Auroraflower
09-03-2005, 08:47 PM
aww

wisdom7 sister this was beautifull :love:
Welcome :wave: to destee,s place..


the compfort the love and concern in this is beautifull









mmm warm hug to you sister :love:
and compfort:heart:





(and beautifull you are joining in for the fasting youre an angel :smile:)





Loveauroraflower:heart:

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