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$$RICH$$
08-24-2005, 09:07 PM
As ink dap the paper
my mind lay on you
staining my heart
forth beloveth i do
i write to my maker

living da fantasy
fill in deep desires
i so betray my feelings
where thee holds
this blazin fire

behold da rapture
of our existance to have
as loveth thee capture
my vision now strive

I weep forth thy in tears
peer da loveth of fears
my only feeling is you
where art thee of truth
i humble cry

Weave under da crystal
the glair of my soul
we can journey in da mystal
of windz to thy place of gold
let forth thy extremeness tame
our direction of compassion

beyond da light my candle burn
as my instill body now yearn
to caress and comfort thy dayz
have one not resight my heart
thy be my harp of tunes i play

as i write unto submission
to secretly confess my love
O' beloveth hear forth thou
and feel thee throughout
da wingz of my sky i fly in
depth yet shyness passion
i so loveth thee openly
i de vor ya vow and keepsake
da moment of emotions near

leadeth me in memories
may da letter reach ya heart
before my last breath
i need thee romance me clam
from thy empty shell of reasons
dimple my spirit of thy loveth
and savior thee treasures
let our just due companionship
forever linger and bring forth
child let's celebrate our family
here under precious memories
beyond compare or dispair i so
beggeth thee beloveth

until the next venture i now
sleepeth inside my slumber
dreameth of thee awaiting ya
return into my chambers
where as i so lay my perfect note
:kiss2: :toast: :kiss2:

A Dyamondluv splash
Nu~wave~Ink Creation
Reserved Rights $R

iwannabe
08-24-2005, 10:27 PM
:1on1: I loved this one. Its very elegant and the mixture of old english vocabular and ebonics is original- and it works, really. I like that and not to bite your style, ima try some **** like that lol.

watzinaname
08-24-2005, 10:30 PM
Thou pen must be weary
flowing so with your earnest plea
For thou beloveth has felt the gentle
breeze that lies deep within thee
The ink from the pen has stained
thou loveth's heart
And warmed its beating core
thru to the innermost part
God knows where fantasy ends
and reality begins
When the unimaginable occurs
and life's fate ultimately wins
Thou note may rest in chambers
but the essence of what's meant
lingers forever in her chambers as well,
blessed with the power of love sent

$$RICH$$
08-25-2005, 12:15 AM
thank you iwannabe happy you can feel and relate to one's style
of creation i say try it and master it to perfection forth it's a creative
that won't go un-notice big ups to ya praise

tru dat sista watz
forth thy loveth is beheld within
unto thy beloveth where art she
that hold da key as the ink drip
to canvas da letter written to stain
and lingering love awaits forth she is
da essence of thee and da soulful
warmeth of love one sought
thankz for the wonder flow and love shown here

MzBlkAngel
09-06-2005, 09:52 AM
oh my love for I have heard thy call

this took me there...i am speechless.....

Peace
Angel

$$RICH$$
09-07-2005, 04:52 AM
thankz Angel happy u was able to recieve the warmth
of this letter written from da hearts book ...................

Auroraflower
09-08-2005, 08:37 AM
beautifull warmth in thy letter.......

i reseaved...




manny reseaved....






i send you deep warmth......



and that god may hold you in his arms...
for his son needs warmth and to be strong...








Loveauroraflower:heart:

$$RICH$$
09-08-2005, 02:37 PM
embracing the warmth thankz Auroraflower for the sweet visit .

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