Fallin so hard for these boys
With no trust in my heart
Is slowly driving me crazy
And tearing my life apart

Holdin back sniffles and tears
That I have suppressed for so long
Is causing me so much stress
That soon my mind will be gone

I need to stop letting these boys
Constantly beat up on my heart
Consistently hurting my feelings
As I cry silently each night in the dark

Why can't someone for once
Care about how I feel
Make an effort to satisfy me
Make me feel that their feelings are real

Keep me feeling safe
Grasping me tight in their arms
Making me attracted to them
Not b/c of their looks, but b/c of their charm

But no I don't receive those things
Never even received a necklace or a ring
Nothing ever real or materialistic
Just anything sexual is all I can achieve

But this girl is gonna find that
Oh please believe
A beautiful man who sees my geniune personality
Who wants me for me

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This flowed in expression of pain by the creed of male
the concept depth express the need to define i like this
flow poeticly and the nice structure of stanza great poem
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You go! Love is out there somewhere for you. Don't ever settle. :karate:

tru dat have you really have a nice poetic hand of creating