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onewithman
08-22-2005, 05:17 PM
What is above the union of husband and wife
A union of such is a heavenly right
So sweet a union of life
A union void of friction and strife

Oh, that’s a union blessed by The Most High
Just the thought of such a union makes one cry
To know your union is touch in such a way
Will forever eliminate the need to pray

What is above the union of husband and wife
A union considered to be an exclusive right
Joined at the head and hip, connected by the power of love
Discharged in a single stream of might
Awe, sweet heaven of pleasures and delight
Such a union worthy of restoring a blind man’s sight

A union bringing the strongest man down to his knees
And a humble man smiling with glee
Such a union this is, even the enemy of God is pleased

Who can separated God’s union of husband and wife
Woe to the surgeon using his finest surgical knife
For what God put together, let no man put asunder
Or you shall hear Mother Nature’s warning
Going into her bag of wonders …
Releasing the sounds of thunder

What is above the union of husband and wife
Why there is no math that can calculate such a height
Silencing the words of mortals impressed
Leaving them to make a shape or outline in the air
So looked upon it causes ones to stare

Wow God’s union of husband and wife
Is a union destined for a blissful life
What is above the union of husband and wife
A light that shines so bright
Dispelling the darkness in the night

What is between the union of husband and wife
Space and opportunity for the rest of your life!

Wisdom7
08-22-2005, 06:58 PM
Nice poem onewithman!

$$RICH$$
08-23-2005, 12:18 AM
very nicely done , this poem is awesome and need no changes
as i see it .....

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