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dymondtanae
08-09-2005, 09:34 PM
Am I imposing on your mental?

By composing this spiritual,

sentimental presentation of my

reputation of intoxication

Taking you on a soul vacation

That will set you free

Get intimate with my words

Coaxing your mind into taking

A journey into my world

Let me bring out the emotions

You try to hide by multiplying

Them by infinity and injecting

Them eternally

I know you’re scared of me

Your hesitations has manifested

Into procrastination because my

Presence makes you think too deeply

Are you a Painaholic, Deathaholic

Loveaholic, Hateaholic

Wordaholic or a Poemaholic

Cause I provide a mixture of all logics

I am 100% proof of truth

I maybe smooth to the taste

But if you know like I know

You’ll just sip me

Don’t try to be hard and down me

Cause this true **** will go straight to your head-PROFOUNDLY



(Continued)

Cause I speak about

Pain that will burn your chest

Death that will water your eyes

Love that will make you stumble off your feet

Hate that will turn your stomach, See

My words will get you buzzed, but my

Poems will get you ****** up

You couldn’t even get to the next cup

My 100% proof of truth will

Make your world spin and

Make you pass out and

You will be devastated by

The phrases I hand out

Society will delude you into

Going to truth anonymous

They’ll swear what I say is preposterous

Cause they’re trying to detoxify you of knowledge

But it’s your decision to make

Truth your addiction

Is this illegal, will they send me to penitentiary

No, but I might get assassinated

Like so many others before me.

The truth seekers

The reality checkers

The 100% proof of truth makers

I represent them all

That’s why I’m giving you this

Spiritual, sentimental presentation of my Reputation of intoxication

So I could give caseloads to my Black Nation

COPYRIGHT2001@LAMEKABLAND






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$$RICH$$
08-10-2005, 10:15 PM
let me say this was grade A.......poeticly
i wouldn't change a thing here nice poem

mzpoetic8705
08-15-2005, 02:58 AM
WOW!!!!! I absolutely LOVE this poem....it just flowed so well...i am glad that i did decide to read it....man, this is real nice. There are no words to describe the way i feel about this...but i do have one thing to say...."Now this is what i call POETRY, and u are def. reppin your skillz"

1poetsought
08-15-2005, 06:54 PM
I know you’re scared of me

Your hesitations has manifested

Into procrastination because my

Presence makes you think too deeply


Like so many others before me.

The truth seekers

The reality checkers

The 100% proof of truth makers

I represent them all


[QUOTE]

Represent!

I'm saying: Ain't nothing to fear but fear itself.





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