--->hey, i haven't finished this one YET, cause i don't know how to end it just yet...but let me know how you like it so far. Thanks :)

Just call me your secret detector,
Cause I can look beyond the lies
And discover the truth.
I can transform into anything or anyone you want me to be
So call me your chameleon
When you cry
At hand, is where I can be right by your side
To remove all tears from your eyes
So call me your tissue
Not just any tissue
But your tissue, in your hands, touching your face
Call me your computer
For I will keep and store all information
That contains to you
And whenever you feel like quizzing me, go right ahead
I am ready! Was born ready….for you, that is
Most of all call me your paper
Where you can store all secrets and inhibitions
Just let it pour on me
Drip all on me
Your words and feelings, that is…
And call me your girl
For that is who I am
Or will soon become
And I’ll call you my liquor store
You have everything but what I need
A book
A pen
And most of all paper
So I guess you’re not the one I hoped u were
Instead u became a false piano playing fictional keys
And who is to blame?
Me
For being so foolish
Falling like a nickel in the hands of a dime
Quickly
Forgetting
Never remembering me

it has a nice structure and the concept
of all the thing u can be to one...nice do finish it.

thanks rich....but i think that i need to work on it a lil more....thank you :)

just a few ajustments and add the ending and it will be a very piece.