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watzinaname
07-19-2005, 10:49 PM
Feeling you
as I do
I knew the moment
you read my love note
my skin began to warm, and
your presence proceeded to float
within
and without...
I am not sure how this came about
but without a doubt
a part of me is within you
as you have become a part of me
How does one even begin to explain
how it is that we feel each other's pain
without even trying to
yet, we do
And words can't really express
the aura of tenderness
when we both feel the love...
such a burst of sunshine
on an otherwise cloudy day
goes beyond anything I can
think of to say
But...consider this my own
miniscule golden ray
humbly expressed
as I'm
Feeling you
as I do....

$$RICH$$
07-19-2005, 11:25 PM
feelings from da heart ......da thoughts flow
sweet drop watz

watzinaname
07-20-2005, 12:41 AM
Yes, from the heart the thoughts flow. Thank you Rich for your kind words.

queentswana
07-23-2005, 02:58 PM
I am not sure how this came about
but without a doubt
a part of me is within you
as you have become a part of me
How does one even begin to explain
how it is that we feel each other's pain
without even trying to
yet, we do

when you feel someone's pain, joy, tears and laughter...
and they feel your's as well, to me it simply means that, with each other, you have surely moved beyond the physical. It's a spiritual bind that one can truely feel one another....
Nothing can get closer, or between it...that has got to be a wonderful strange feeling.
I've been there, you're blessed

watzinaname
07-24-2005, 09:23 AM
when you feel someone's pain, joy, tears and laughter...
and they feel your's as well, to me it simply means that, with each other, you have surely moved beyond the physical. It's a spiritual bind that one can truely feel one another....
Nothing can get closer, or between it...that has got to be a wonderful strange feeling.
I've been there, you're blessed

You are certainly right, it is a strange, wonderful feeling. That was a beautiful response queent, I appreciate that, as I appreciate you. Thank you sis.

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