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watzinaname
07-18-2005, 01:08 AM
They decided to meet on an island
an island in their mind
They decided to create an Eden
only the two of them could find
She wanted a beach filled with warm pink sand
and a royal blue painted sky
He desired a passionately raging purple sea
and a golden moon placed way up high
But most of all she wanted to sip the wine
she tasted from his succulent lips
And he especially desired to sample her honey
sweetened skin as he suckled her fingertips
Soon entwined lovers were covered with pink granules
and a salty breeze blew across that sky of royal blue
Purple waves rinsed sand off bare bronzed bodies, while
the moon created intimate shadows saying I love you
They decided to meet on an island
an island in their mind
They decided to create an Eden
only the two of them could find....

$$RICH$$
07-18-2005, 02:19 AM
a beautiful place to meet and interlude in
i really love how this was painted in perfection

watzinaname
07-18-2005, 08:38 PM
Glad to know you felt the beauty in these surroundings Rich. Appreciated.

$$RICH$$
07-18-2005, 10:39 PM
most welcome sista let it continue

Tha-Emissary
07-19-2005, 05:54 PM
I say you got the making love on the beach scene right down to the T'bone.
I like the colors you used alot, like pink sands. I guess that made me think they was rolling in koolaid sugar! Nevertheless, I enjoyed your piece.

watzinaname
07-19-2005, 07:34 PM
I shall try to let it continue on brotha Rich.
Your response made me smile ThaEmissary, glad you enjoyed this colorful piece brotha.

deepy
07-24-2005, 05:09 PM
wow watz...lovely imagery..and thought
have you ever been to eluthera in the bahamas...the sand is pink...
pink....

Keita Kenyatta
07-24-2005, 05:14 PM
You want to save some of this hot stuff for our collab ? :-)

watzinaname
07-24-2005, 05:18 PM
No I have never been deepy, but I did go to Bermuda some years ago, and the beaches had the prettiest pink sand. Thank you sista.
LOL @ Keita. Thanks brotha, alright.

ASHANTA
08-01-2005, 06:16 PM
The spirit of the heart is gentle your work is a masterpeace continue to teach my sister in spirit.

watzinaname
08-02-2005, 01:04 AM
So kind of you to say Ashanta, thank you sis.

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