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Tha-Emissary
07-16-2005, 01:24 PM
It’s true
I am a man impregnated.
Love is my joy, my burden.
I carry it as a woman is with child.
I have well exceeded woman’s standard nine months,
Carrying for almost four years
With every morning sickness comes a new Love sickness,
To plague me morning, noon and midnight.
Still there are so few words,
Despite the passage of time
To describe how this Love
Is like a beautiful little life inside of me,
Growing, kicking me everyday for not letting it be born.

BrownEyed Girly
07-16-2005, 02:48 PM
Go ahead and just let it be, let it grow, you never know what it will become. I loved this and i was really feeling this. Much love to you!

$$RICH$$
07-16-2005, 04:19 PM
see i know this so well
i carry this love sickness
spell upon me daily and the
joy i can embrace as pain

well said and i can feel every line....

watzinaname
07-16-2005, 06:45 PM
Wow...You know I'm not even going to say much cause it won't do this piece justice. This was beautiful.

SwtT
07-16-2005, 11:55 PM
this was a great piece

1poetsought
07-17-2005, 11:25 PM
New birth is a miracle of nature. (Your poem is truly inspiring!) - :welldone:

Born again promises of tomorrow speak of love anew.

nevar
12-04-2005, 08:23 PM
ahh isnt this sweet we must flow sometimes call me at
1-800- illbethere. flow on that emissary.
cause you got tha flo that necessary
to me to come visit ya in the month of febuarary.
ok i'll stop.

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