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watzinaname 07-09-2005, 01:58 AM Such warmth
Cascades through my core
blanketing me with golden stardust.
And although I've felt a soul's essence before,
this...this feels like the heavens
opened up and decided to let love pour...
Such warmth...
Invades my being
allowing the midnight sky to
enter inside releasing drips of joy freeing
tears of meteor showers...
As the moonlight serenades
I can feel you entering my realm
such warmth cascades
with you at the helm
so often you called unto me
in this mystical way
until I trusted myself enough
to let myself simply lay...
and stay...
open to it
Allowing me to experience
the pleasure
and the treasure
of
such
warmth
$$RICH$$ 07-09-2005, 02:36 AM when one can open to such and cascade deep into it's beauty
the warm covered blanket feels so good , i've had the pleasure to
feel this warmth myself and i mean it felt good .
watzinaname 07-09-2005, 02:57 AM Yes, the warmth certainly does feel inviting. Happy to know you've felt this way too. Thanks a million Rich.
Tha-Emissary 07-09-2005, 11:15 AM A piece fitting of being beside a fireplace with someone to ignite the ambers of love. Nice
watzinaname 07-09-2005, 05:02 PM That was so poetic of you to say, thank you Tha Emissary for such a nice response.
Auroraflower 08-04-2005, 03:42 PM aww ...
beautifull....sis
it is such a blessing to feel such warmth....
and hug the warmth when it is there...
LoveAuroraflower:heart:
watzinaname 08-06-2005, 10:52 AM Yes, it certainly is Auroraflower, I appreciate your response, thank you.
soulful2006 08-06-2005, 01:00 PM Yes your word choice in this piece was divine. Feelings of such warmth should be fullly enjoyed and taken with the utmost sincerity.This was a beautiful piece.
watzinaname 08-06-2005, 02:08 PM Thank you soulful2006, you've been writing some beautiful pieces yourself, appreciated.
Alkebulan 08-10-2005, 08:22 PM "Such warmth
Cascades through my core
blanketing me with golden stardust.
And although I've felt a soul's essence before,
this...this feels like the heavens
opened up and decided to let love pour..."
sister, u definitely kno how 2 raise the temperature round heya, & i don't mean :cook: either! i esp enjoyed ur rhyming pattern. :jump:
darn, i almost missed this 1.
watzinaname 08-10-2005, 08:35 PM Alkebulan, thank you so much for letting me know that this piece provided you with, such warmth. I appreciate the props brotha, and nice to "see" you in the forum.
deepy 08-14-2005, 05:13 AM such warmth cascading
such warmth parading
such warmth within , without
a fluid poem without a doubt..
thanks watz...
watzinaname 08-14-2005, 10:26 AM And thank you deepy for the warmth in your flow in response, appreciated.
mzpoetic8705 08-15-2005, 03:01 AM this poem definitely brings a warm feeling to its readers....good job !!
watzinaname 08-15-2005, 09:49 AM Thank you mzpoetic, glad you feel my words conveyed the feeling of warmth.
HODEE 08-15-2005, 09:55 AM Experience it Without fear!
Great flow Watz
watzinaname 08-16-2005, 10:14 PM Oh indeed I am Hodee, thank you brotha.
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