I remember when I was alone I would look up in the sky
And in the sky would be my two favorite stars

These particular two I cherish from the heart
You see you may not understand why I sought comfort from them
Their light shone bright and was never dim

They had a glow no other could see
Just to be among them was a treat

One had a passion for music the other life
One was a devoted father and the other a devoted wife

I peared into the sky and one was gone
Could it be she left to go home

Sad I was to never look upon her glow
I know in my heart she loved me tho'

Months later the same thing happened again
God I can't believe I've just lost another friend

Now my two favorite fallen stars I will forever miss
There are many other stars among me, but these two will forever shine with bliss

This is dedicated to my Grandmother and Uncle I love you always!!!!!!!!!!

I have to say it was created beautifully and a grand dedication
this poem will touch many lives ....it hold depth and realism
don't change not a verse ......great poem from the heart !

This stellar poem is at home in the heavens, GREAT WORK, poet!

thanks for the love i so yearn to be a famous writer and i'm glad to be able share my gift. i thankyou from the bottem and top of my heart :hearts4:

now i like this....



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You shine to Beautifull Poet.... :hearts4:

thankyou for reading my poem.