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selecta
05-05-2005, 01:57 PM
Tribute to all the females

In midst of it all
They are there
Wondering themselves why
Why are they here
Through the hurt, misuse of earthly men
Along with the tribulations of being woman
Just like man they hurt and want to be loved
Yet their emotions are on a different level
They cry, moan late at night
I love you says the earthly man
Does he mean it? Does any one man understand?
Screaming and nobody hears
Forgive men of their sins and pray 4 their souls
It is just the devil showing him self
Do not blame man even though he failed the test
U were built for success
Not for all that mess
Kneel ask God for happiness
Ask God for his forever love
God is only man to fear
God loves you my dear
Rise sister become a queen
Rise above all, you have destiny
Rise you have a purpose
Rise because you have heart
Rise because you want happiness
Rise and take your bed and walk your healed
Rise because you have beautiful female’s eyes

$$RICH$$
05-06-2005, 12:11 AM
this was nice and hit points , it would have been even more deeper
with maybe two stanzas to bring out the rawness of the poem but
i love how it hit

1poetsought
05-07-2005, 01:32 AM
I'm feelin' the evidence in good faith,

Woman... the edification of man ~

Continue to do your thang! :great:

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