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More ~bye's than hi's~

queentswana
04-20-2005, 01:54 PM
You're not yet gone, but you get weaker by the day
and I stay on my knee's...and I pray, and I pray

What a messed up way to die...
I'm so tired of telling my loved ones, bye

You're a treasure to know, my beautiful one
you're leaving behind you, two daughters and a son

We have the same blood running through our veins
now your life is cut short, by somebody else's games

You're so young and beautiful, a sight for sore eyes
and it tears at my heartstrings...to say my "good-byes"

There was nothing you won't do for us, there's nowhere you wouldn't go
yet I stand here with tears, counting the days, when they'll drop you down below

I seen it comming, as I kneeled down to pray
for the creator to come ~Gently~...and take you away

Since pleasure, has turned into a Death Wish
it leaves you to wonder...who's next on the list?

I need to say this, yet I say it with anger
be very careful people, cause out there is danger

~WoW~

The same thing that's bringing us in this world...is taking us out
:bomb:
The very thing that's giving us life...is taking our life....away

D@m...
what now?

AHMOSE
04-20-2005, 05:12 PM
Should I leave Or should I stay
I just dont know what to say
I will leave you with a kiss
One that you will surely miss

Thanks for hitting us with this piece.

$$RICH$$
04-21-2005, 12:11 AM
whewwwwwwwwwwww!
guess i'll go i don't know
don't u know how i love u so
i leave weak or strong
but ur miss me when i'm gone

tyte mad drop !

1poetsought
04-23-2005, 02:13 AM
We are all standing in line to leave these bodies when that day comes. Each day is like the first and last days of our life, and a gift worthy of our respect. I'm really grateful for the warmth of you, for being and sharing. :picture:

oldsoul
04-29-2005, 11:49 PM
WoW = Words of Wisdom

watzinaname
05-01-2005, 12:42 PM
I read this piece twice, because what I thought you were saying the first time, hit me like a shot in the night the second. You're wording on this was so on point and heart wrenching especially:
"The same thing that's bringing us in this world...is taking us out
The very thing that's giving us life...is taking our life....away"
We want to share ourselves physically with that special someone, show them just how much we care, but my God, it could very well kill us. Peace sista.

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:31 PM
Should I leave Or should I stay
I just dont know what to say
I will leave you with a kiss
One that you will surely miss

Thanks for hitting us with this piece.

We all need to be slapped with a brutal stick called "reality" ...for sure
thanks for stopping by

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:33 PM
whewwwwwwwwwwww!
guess i'll go i don't know
don't u know how i love u so
i leave weak or strong
but ur miss me when i'm gone

tyte mad drop !

I miss you when you even speak of leaving :laugh:
thanks rich, for always being near

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:35 PM
We are all standing in line to leave these bodies when that day comes. Each day is like the first and last days of our life, and a gift worthy of our respect. I'm really grateful for the warmth of you, for being and sharing. :picture:


Here's hoping I'm at the back of the line :laugh:
thanks 1poet for your support

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:37 PM
WoW = Words of Wisdom

Yes, they are words, and the words are indeed "wisdom" ....do anybody hear me out there???

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:40 PM
I read this piece twice, because what I thought you were saying the first time, hit me like a shot in the night the second. You're wording on this was so on point and heart wrenching especially:
"The same thing that's bringing us in this world...is taking us out
The very thing that's giving us life...is taking our life....away"
We want to share ourselves physically with that special someone, show them just how much we care, but my God, it could very well kill us. Peace sista.

That's so true watz, but what road do we take now?
thanks to you for the love

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