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Can you love me past my pain

queentswana
04-11-2005, 04:53 PM
Can you love me pass my pain

Sometimes I feel like I'm going insane
*I wonder can you love me, pass my pain*

The pain was so deep, it ran through my soul
invaded my body, til my world turned cold

so for awhile...

My heart was on "lock-down"...but only for now
I'm going through withdrawals, then, onward bound

It may sound strange, but I invited the pain
I want to painfully know, what sent me insane

So I can feel "whole" again, alive and "free"...
to be "all and everything", I'm suppose to be

yeah...

Sometimes I feel like I'm going insane
so again, I ask...
*can you love me pass my pain*?

$$RICH$$
04-12-2005, 12:21 AM
can love u deep in pain
to help carry u pass the insane
and mend the pits that tap at ya
brain to show u love again
yes i can love u pass yo pain
to make u feel whole again

mad tyte drop i felt this one in my heart

watzinaname
04-12-2005, 12:48 AM
This one tugs at the reader's heartstrings. Sometimes you have to be in the middle of your pain to learn to actually "feel" again. Emotive and strongly felt sis.

Destee
04-12-2005, 01:23 AM
you are such a wonderful poet Sister Queen ... thoroughly enjoyed this peace.

:heart:

Destee

1poetsought
04-12-2005, 02:08 AM
You're the Queen of Hearts, Girl!

I love the question you put to him.

AHMOSE
04-12-2005, 12:58 PM
Pow! Show us Queen's lightning bolt cause this piece struck fire out of the readers. Flow on poet I can feel your pen.....

MzBlkAngel
04-12-2005, 01:10 PM
this was awesome the question is right on point a woman's heart is very delicate once hurt it is hard to get all the pieces back together...i loved this piece and truelly know this....oh well


Peace
Angel

oldsoul
04-12-2005, 11:09 PM
It is the beauty of struggle that allows us to get to the essence of life; pain is a part of struggle. Challenge is what makes us stronger. This is a beautiful piece.

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:09 PM
can love u deep in pain
to help carry u pass the insane
and mend the pits that tap at ya
brain to show u love again
yes i can love u pass yo pain
to make u feel whole again

mad tyte drop i felt this one in my heart

I have no doubt, to what you're about
but can you knock the "pain" right out?

Make my weak heart strong once more
and I will love you ...to the core

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:14 PM
This one tugs at the reader's heartstrings. Sometimes you have to be in the middle of your pain to learn to actually "feel" again. Emotive and strongly felt sis.

That's so true, and giving the fact that I choose not to live in a fantasy world...I want to keep it real, including bearing with the pain.
thanks for the love watz

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:20 PM
you are such a wonderful poet Sister Queen ... thoroughly enjoyed this peace.

:heart:

Destee

Hey Destee,
I/we can be nothing less than wonderful, when surrounded by the wonders of good people.
much thanks and love for stoping by

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:22 PM
You're the Queen of Hearts, Girl!

I love the question you put to him.

And I must say 1poet...that's a tall order, "loving me pass my pain" ...smh
thanks for steping into my heart for a moment

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:24 PM
Pow! Show us Queen's lightning bolt cause this piece struck fire out of the readers. Flow on poet I can feel your pen.....


My thanks to you Soulja, I have nothing but luv for ya

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:25 PM
this was awesome the question is right on point a woman's heart is very delicate once hurt it is hard to get all the pieces back together...i loved this piece and truelly know this....oh well


Peace
Angel

thanks angel heart, I know you do understand
thanks for the luv you always give

queentswana
05-08-2005, 11:29 PM
It is the beauty of struggle that allows us to get to the essence of life; pain is a part of struggle. Challenge is what makes us stronger. This is a beautiful piece.

Yes, life's struggles we both bare and wear.
thanks for the luv

4EVERLUV
09-04-2006, 12:20 PM
Now that's a tall order for some.
Feeln' this for real.

Nice write sista.

queentswana
09-07-2006, 01:04 AM
Now that's a tall order for some.
Feeln' this for real.

Nice write sista.


Yes, it's a tall order indeed, concitering how deep some scars can get.
thanks for stoping in.

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