queentswana 04-11-2005, 04:53 PM Can you love me pass my pain
Sometimes I feel like I'm going insane
*I wonder can you love me, pass my pain*
The pain was so deep, it ran through my soul
invaded my body, til my world turned cold
so for awhile...
My heart was on "lock-down"...but only for now
I'm going through withdrawals, then, onward bound
It may sound strange, but I invited the pain
I want to painfully know, what sent me insane
So I can feel "whole" again, alive and "free"...
to be "all and everything", I'm suppose to be
yeah...
Sometimes I feel like I'm going insane
so again, I ask...
*can you love me pass my pain*?
$$RICH$$ 04-12-2005, 12:21 AM can love u deep in pain
to help carry u pass the insane
and mend the pits that tap at ya
brain to show u love again
yes i can love u pass yo pain
to make u feel whole again
mad tyte drop i felt this one in my heart
watzinaname 04-12-2005, 12:48 AM This one tugs at the reader's heartstrings. Sometimes you have to be in the middle of your pain to learn to actually "feel" again. Emotive and strongly felt sis.
Destee 04-12-2005, 01:23 AM you are such a wonderful poet Sister Queen ... thoroughly enjoyed this peace.
:heart:
Destee
1poetsought 04-12-2005, 02:08 AM You're the Queen of Hearts, Girl!
I love the question you put to him.
AHMOSE 04-12-2005, 12:58 PM Pow! Show us Queen's lightning bolt cause this piece struck fire out of the readers. Flow on poet I can feel your pen.....
MzBlkAngel 04-12-2005, 01:10 PM this was awesome the question is right on point a woman's heart is very delicate once hurt it is hard to get all the pieces back together...i loved this piece and truelly know this....oh well
Peace
Angel
oldsoul 04-12-2005, 11:09 PM It is the beauty of struggle that allows us to get to the essence of life; pain is a part of struggle. Challenge is what makes us stronger. This is a beautiful piece.
queentswana 05-08-2005, 11:09 PM can love u deep in pain
to help carry u pass the insane
and mend the pits that tap at ya
brain to show u love again
yes i can love u pass yo pain
to make u feel whole again
mad tyte drop i felt this one in my heart
I have no doubt, to what you're about
but can you knock the "pain" right out?
Make my weak heart strong once more
and I will love you ...to the core
queentswana 05-08-2005, 11:14 PM This one tugs at the reader's heartstrings. Sometimes you have to be in the middle of your pain to learn to actually "feel" again. Emotive and strongly felt sis.
That's so true, and giving the fact that I choose not to live in a fantasy world...I want to keep it real, including bearing with the pain.
thanks for the love watz
queentswana 05-08-2005, 11:20 PM you are such a wonderful poet Sister Queen ... thoroughly enjoyed this peace.
:heart:
Destee
Hey Destee,
I/we can be nothing less than wonderful, when surrounded by the wonders of good people.
much thanks and love for stoping by
queentswana 05-08-2005, 11:22 PM You're the Queen of Hearts, Girl!
I love the question you put to him.
And I must say 1poet...that's a tall order, "loving me pass my pain" ...smh
thanks for steping into my heart for a moment
queentswana 05-08-2005, 11:24 PM Pow! Show us Queen's lightning bolt cause this piece struck fire out of the readers. Flow on poet I can feel your pen.....
My thanks to you Soulja, I have nothing but luv for ya
queentswana 05-08-2005, 11:25 PM this was awesome the question is right on point a woman's heart is very delicate once hurt it is hard to get all the pieces back together...i loved this piece and truelly know this....oh well
Peace
Angel
thanks angel heart, I know you do understand
thanks for the luv you always give
queentswana 05-08-2005, 11:29 PM It is the beauty of struggle that allows us to get to the essence of life; pain is a part of struggle. Challenge is what makes us stronger. This is a beautiful piece.
Yes, life's struggles we both bare and wear.
thanks for the luv
4EVERLUV 09-04-2006, 12:20 PM Now that's a tall order for some.
Feeln' this for real.
Nice write sista.
queentswana 09-07-2006, 01:04 AM Now that's a tall order for some.
Feeln' this for real.
Nice write sista.
Yes, it's a tall order indeed, concitering how deep some scars can get.
thanks for stoping in.
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