Guess what?
I'm pregnant, yes I'm having your baby
and I aint the only one who got to take care of this responsibilty
You see you helped me make this, I didn't do this by myself
You said I wouldn't be alone, you will be there if I needed any help
now you want to neglect me, want to forget how I told you that we are having a baby
You want to forget about me and our situation to tend to yo' girlfriend, but I can't get mad cause you told me you had a lil' wifey in the begining.
No, it's not bout you and me, it's about our seed
it's about 8 months from now being a father that my baby really needs
OH HONEY! I don't want you, you already know what you got to do,
be there for yo seed mentally, finacially and emotionally too
and I feel sorry for your lil wifey cause she fell in love with a sorry excuse of a man
I bet she didn't have you getting me pregnant apart of you and her plans
S*** it wasn't apart of mines either.


Again this is ya gurl miss-no-love tell me what you think :hearthis:

a man is gon b a man,do s*** that dont make no sense, but you remember you and god can do thisGuess what?
I'm pregnant, yes I'm having your baby
and I aint the only one who got to take care of this responsibilty
You see you helped me make this, I didn't do this by myself
You said I wouldn't be alone, you will be there if I needed any help
now you want to neglect me, want to forget how I told you that we are having a baby
You want to forget about me and our situation to tend to yo' girlfriend, but I can't get mad cause you told me you had a lil' wifey in the begining.
No, it's not bout you and me, it's about our seed
it's about 8 months from now being a father that my baby really needs
OH HONEY! I don't want you, you already know what you got to do,
be there for yo seed mentally, finacially and emotionally too
and I feel sorry for your lil wifey cause she fell in love with a sorry excuse of a man
I bet she didn't have you getting me pregnant apart of you and her plans
S*** it wasn't apart of mines either.


Again this is ya gurl miss-no-love tell me what you think :hearthis:

That was cool. Now write one from the point of view of a responsible sister who checks herself before she wrecks herself!

whas going down miss-no-love...when i looked at the title....i was like...it's either gonna be about a good situation or a bad situation...there's nothing in between.......after reading it...i was like....this poem is really bad...not bad meaning bad but bad meaning good!...lol...these couple of lines rang in my head for a sec after i read it...

No, it's not bout you and me, it's about our seed
it's about 8 months from now being a father that my baby really needs

good job poet...i wanna see some more joints from you...word
one love
khasm

nicely done a well felt poem and fill with echos !
nice work