To let you all know.. This was a poem I wrote to my ex girlfriend Yanna, when her and I were going out.. Just to clear that up.

When I picture a woman with beauty and love
you are the first image I think of

You are the foundation of my affection
and out of all my worldly desires
you are the first that I acquire.

I hold you deeply and dear to my heart
but I worry that one day we may grow apart
and I'll lose you to someone new

Until then you have all my affection
For you have taught me the true meaning of feminine
Showed me a true friend and how to treat a woman

and my loyalty because of your elegance
style, beauty, grace
And your goddess - like face

I hold feelings for you
that are not easy to replace

Young "P" got it goin on. I like the way that you are able to express your innermost feelings. The sky is limit for one so in touch with their feelings. :picture:

I agree with 1poet you really dug deep on this one and it come shows in your writing, great work

Anymore Critiques?

the depth of this spell awesome
i like the full concept of it