I wanna run
I wanna run so far away from here
the stench of this funky bull****
Is altering my coherence

Mass ejaculation
Supremacy fornication
raping the true seed of what it means to be free

I wanna run!
I wanna plant my feet in mother earth
and sprint my *** right on outta here
away from the mental strife
away from political knives
that keep on stabbing me repetitiously

I wanna run
I wanna run so fast that I rewrite scientific physiology
shatter technology, reverse the lingo of psychology
I'll be a Universal enima laced in potent stemina
To shake this nation back to its proper rotation
Are you feelin meh?

I wanna run!
I wanna run so swift that my feet no longer touch base
soar past some gazelles in a race
until I touch the nebula in space
with no hesitation in my pace

And if anyone ask you whats going on
you just tell them I felt like running

But you and I no, that this ain't gonna happen, Right?
So phuck it!.................I'll stay and fight!
But I can't stop thinking about how much I wanna run!

How much... I just wanna... run home!!!

This poem's social commentary elevates its importance. As a reaction to a less than perfect state of affairs, it is runninig away, a most appropriate statement. Its champion, the author, chooses to stand her ground and fight the powers that be. I celebrate the day that this poem was written. It does not strive for perfection, but holds truth to the litmus test of conciousness. :zipit:

I can't see one thing that needs changing, wonderful piece.

Thank you 1Poet and QueenTs! Yall sure I don't need to change something?

I think that it expresses what you are saying to a "T".

I FELT LIKE THAT TOO...WISH I HAD THE SKILLS AT THAT TIME TO LAY IT OUT LIKE YOU DID. GUESS WHAT? YOU REALLY FELT THAT....AND IN MY OWN LITTLE MIND, I CAN ALMOST PUT MY FINGER ON WHERE THAT CAME FROM. :-) .....that feeling is just the beginning, but it'll get better. GOOD WORK !!![/COLOR]

ok...i can feel this piece right here...i think we all feel this way at one point or another...100 miles and running fo sho...this is another poem i would not change...the rhythm and pace was great along with the message conveyed...one day...none of us will have to run...word...thanks for droppin this gem over here purple

one love
khasm

Hey Sister Purple i see ya made it....

this peice was awesome and it was felt indeed i dont see anything to change it is awesome just the way it is!!!!!
Peace
Angel

let me say awesome and a perfect hit to any publisher
well written and pose'd sista ......