iight... this is really the first time i'm hittin this forum...
i usually dont write stories... and to me this is just a long poem...

this right here is i guess you can call the introduction.... bare wit me...
stolen property

dammn
at first glance
when i met you
i wanted nothing but to be within your hold
as the night got late
our casual conversation got old
knowing you threw a friend
i thought your invitation was purely genuine
wine and dine for free
with a handsome gentleemn
u offered me
over and over
repatedly
you treated me
gradually as time passed
i softley beagn to feel you hands
as they slid up my thigh
lying in your bed
at your house
thoughts were swirling
on how to safely deny
as the touching and kissing continued
i began to question was i really into you
knowing that our love had elapsed with time
i also knew this moment shouldnt be mine
feelings of loosing my soul
over came me
as you forced your self within me
all i could do was trace back memories
signs of you doing this to me
breaking my body in 2
separating my heart from my soul
leaving me abused
inserting urslef in places not welcome
leaving traces of a places where the devil's from
got me questioning my actions after ur done
tryin to figure out who really won
you might have thought u could steal my soul
take it, smash it and run
but never my faith
or fear to use my gun
exactly wat i worte
you read it right
he shoudnt have tried me that night
now im sitting here tossing and turning
wondering if it was all worth it
struggling to overcome
because another battle just begun.

exquisitely done...nothing but raw emotion showing in this drop.
poetry is such a lovely thing eh?

wow!! deep and smooth
stolen property this was in da raw
love the poetic story next part please wow sista !

thanks greggy and rich.... that made me feel better....more will continue