My heart is in pain ...in serious pain
but so the f*** what, I have more to gain

I lost out on love, and all that it meant
but who the hell cares...it was love well spent

Oh, there were moments when love, was at it's best
but some power took over ...at your request

And this power you hold, is well in control
like the gods in the heavens, like untarnished gold

You know that seed, I told you I planted?
well, you were the seed ...that took me for granted

But all was not lost ...as you took the wrong road
so I re-planted my soil ...and guess what I sowed?

:spinstar: Tranquility :spinstar:
:spinstar: Sensuality :spinstar:
:spinstar: Divinity :spinstar:

Yes, I skillfully planted, all this in one crop
yeah, I loved and I lost ...but I gave you your props

*you gave me a lemon ...and I learned to make lemonade*

word...i feel this scribe to the utmost...been there
keep dropin jewlez sista...
one love
khasm

Queent....as I feel the sorrow in this, I also feel much hope for tomorrow, for we are never quite sure of what it will bring, but hope...The poem itself, was written with flair. Peace sis.

i feel this scribe and you know i do tight flow the value of learning and growing to bloom again and stronger...thank you for sharing...Angel

Sister done planted a seed in concrete, and sowed a magnificent Rose!
Beautiful write Queen! you always no how to
encourage a Sister!

Loving this drop!

true indeed like a silver lining
well felt

word...i feel this scribe to the utmost...been there
keep dropin jewlez sista...
one love
khasm

I was the one to pave the road, at lease it felt like that. Thanks for stopping by
And as much as I paved it...I couldn't walk it long.

Queent....as I feel the sorrow in this, I also feel much hope for tomorrow, for we are never quite sure of what it will bring, but hope...The poem itself, was written with flair. Peace sis.


Thanks for the luv on this piece, I certainly hope..."hope" play it's rightful part..lol

true indeed like a silver lining
well felt


$$RICH$$ ...
Angel heart ...

To know that the two of you are always close by ...makes me feel very good. Thanks for the "backbone" ...you never fail to give.

Sister done planted a seed in concrete, and sowed a magnificent Rose!
Beautiful write Queen! you always no how to
encourage a Sister!

Loving this drop!

I first tried the soil...to no avail, so, whatever works, is the face of reality. It's important to keep the "whirl" ...turning.
thanks for the drop-in

sista Queentswana i love your work and will alway support ya vibe
it brings realism , truth and peace all together u know keep doing it
as i read u forever

Wisdom comes to you intrinsically...

like breathing...blinking...or even thinking...

...so naturally, does wisdom come to you

...again, I am enamoured by your work!

Much love,
Sage

'yeah, I loved and I lost ...but I gave you your props'

Great piece and superb close!

'yeah, I loved and I lost ...but I gave you your props'

Great piece and superb close!


thanks for the drop in, and support on this piece

that is deep sistah and i love it i can really relate to this poem hands up and two snaps

that is deep sistah and i love it i can really relate to this poem hands up and two snaps


Welcome Altameeze,
It's very good to have you aboard, please make yourself at home, surely you are.
thanks for the luv you dropped here, now I'm sitting in the wings waiting to read you.
again welcome home.

It's all in the way you look at it, isn't it? If you keep looking up instead of down and keep looking forward instead of backwards you'll finally be able to smell the roses. Thanks for putting that perspective out there.

It's all in the way you look at it, isn't it? If you keep looking up instead of down and keep looking forward instead of backwards you'll finally be able to smell the roses. Thanks for putting that perspective out there.

You're so right, whenever we tend to look "Down & Back" ...we lose and miss a part of ourselfs.
thanks for stepping in my corner of the whirl.

queen:
This is an awesome write. I have to co-sign
with angelic's comments about you. I agree
"Wisdom comes to you intrinsically"
Thats why I luv reading your posts. I always know
that I will get something positive and real from you.
I can really relate to this piece.

Much luv

queen:
This is an awesome write. I have to co-sign
with angelic's comments about you. I agree
"Wisdom comes to you intrinsically"
Thats why I luv reading your posts. I always know
that I will get something positive and real from you.
I can really relate to this piece.

Much luv

I thought I saw a shining :spinstar: ..but when I blinked...I saw you.
Your kindness do brightens our world, thanks sis.

Oh my goodness!

Consider me deeply touched.

Thank you so much for sharing.

This poem has done to me what a beautiful sunrise does to me when I start my day. How invigorating, yet lamenting.

THANK YOU SISTER.

~Ikoro

And you skillfully planted this one in my heart too

Oh my goodness!

Consider me deeply touched.

Thank you so much for sharing.

This poem has done to me what a beautiful sunrise does to me when I start my day. How invigorating, yet lamenting.

THANK YOU SISTER.

~Ikoro

When my work touches another..that touch in turn, ...boomerang back ..Thanks for the wonderful feeling.
Welcome ..welcome, please make yourself at home..because you are.

And you skillfully planted this one in my heart too

Not to mention, I was skillfully droping facts
Welcome aboard..do make yourself at home
thanks for the love.