Caught in a diabolical snare
weaved in the tappering stare
masterd un card and care
little fawn snatched & threaten
inside a trap as a prey
living in a life long day
standing in da looking glass
of a pathway shamefaced lass
weathering the storm to pass
in a dunghill of despairs
in da depth of stagnant air
i won't fade away !

You've painted quite an intriguing scene, makes me want to learn more. Is this part of a bigger write? If not, it should be. Well written piece.

This is mysterious, $$RICH$$, and I dig this side of you. :dance1:

thankz watz i have many styles and sides of me i can come from it's what keep me
mysterious.

Gempis u know big thankz sis yes showing another side of my pen
i am a mystery

I love when your mental takes over and flow is mysterous...love the vibe of this......flow head coz you know i be reading.....Angel

big thankz Angel u know me sometime i just release it .