"Lastnight"

lastnight she dove into me like naked skin into cool water
left me breathless and free
lastnight we learned things deeper than surfaces with extended attention paid to details
and details were paid in full
til I almost bust off the lustful aroma of possibilities
and how the infinite was in reach when we closed our eyes and dared to dream
I swore I tasted her kiss this morning when the first light touched me
and when it was over I wanted it back...
greedy was I
but love, no judge would convict me

lastnight I pictured what chocolate ice cream would look like
taste like, its feel and touch dripping off inviting nipples
I hope my dirty mind doesn't betray my trust
I hope my smile and eyes hold their composure and not let my sip of wine know how thirsty I may be
a dangerous thing she possesses, that kind of control of me
but this thing is indescribeable, the air between us how could we possibly put words to
if your body was a candle... every part of it..
I want to take a flame to slowly...
and bask in the painful heat of your wax dripping that fire on me
when you're totally melted all over me, I only want to know that you felt me
and your name would be written right there
traces of your folicles caught up in my hair
looking back our ****** up beds though separated by a journey
it looks like you were right there
hold up.. how can all this be just me?
the promises that lingered in my ear
and the nasty things you said to me

the beautiful smile that escaped the moment that we hugged naked
the fire consumed me
burned away our costumes and daily facades
because in the middle of the night we
and after thirty minutes of rest we
again
it was just before dawn you hugged me and we
just couldn't stop

and that was the point
when she dove into me

my brutha my brutha dis here lastnight dive
that took u on a journey was awesome and tyteeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
drop the feverish lava bruh !

It comes a time when ...*whew* ..well when uncontrollabe :flame: start burning out of control...yes, it be's like that sometimes.
Wonderful poem ...I like where you took this, thanks for dropping it

This was quite spicy, for sure, but it also conveyed deep passion and care. This flow was raging, brotha. Flow some more poet.

That poem was off the meter!!! Had me choking just reading it aloud. Nice!!!!!

I couldn't take my eyes off of the screen. That was beautiful and sensual in everyway imaginable. Something I can listen to when with the significant other!

wow ...


now did we dove into this poem... :swim:




:welldone: poet..














Lovelibertylady:heart:

this was soooo beautiful. I know it's been on the sight for a minute, and i'm just now reading it but i had to read it twice, it was just that wonderful.