Who am I?

I'm the water, that makes your body "wet"
one splash, and it's "me" ...you'll never forget.
:spinstar:
I lay to your skin, like a second layer,
don't fight it, I'm "water"...the other player.
:spinstar:
Think of the wonders, I can do to you,
now need you ask ...of the "wonders" I do?
:spinstar:
Turn me "hot", or you can turn me "cold",
whatever you do...you're in control.
:spinstar:
Do you know who I am?

I'm the "suds"...that cover your skin,
I slide in places ...others never been.
:spinstar:
I remove the dirt, from head to toe,
and there's no part of you ...I won't go.
:spinstar:
Let me roll gently, down your spine,
and it's legal too ...it's not a crime.
:spinstar:
There's plenty of me ...to cover you,
and that's exactly what ...I'm here to do.
:spinstar:
I'll be here for you ...each and every day,
to turn "hot or cold" ...whenever you say.
:spinstar:
Who am I?
Yes,
...I'm your :spinstar: "soap and water" :spinstar:

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LOL@Keita! That was creative, fun, and a thought provoking scribe Sister!
Especially for those who might forget to use the soap and water.

I just loved it! I think I'm going to learn this one and recite it to my son. Since I am always telling him to wash your butt! :laugh:

wash wash wash !!!!!!!!!!!
dis was on point of who one is really
whewwwwwww! hand me the soap
is that water mines ?

LOL@Purplemoons. Sort of sounds like you're a basic necessity, Queent. Am I on the right track with that? As always, enjoying your flow.

One of the keys of success longevity is to continuously create original things, but the wisdom of how to create one thing original comes with years of righteous struggle and self-less giving. This is a truly original song/poem, an Afrikan lullaby, a song of desire, ode of devotion...all those things and more.
!!!!OutStanDing!!!!

LOL@Keita! That was creative, fun, and a thought provoking scribe Sister!
Especially for those who might forget to use the soap and water.

I just loved it! I think I'm going to learn this one and recite it to my son. Since I am always telling him to wash your butt! :laugh:


lol@purple ...I surely understand that, when they're at a certain age.

wash wash wash !!!!!!!!!!!
dis was on point of who one is really
whewwwwwww! hand me the soap
is that water mines ?


lol@rich
and to think, water is plentiful, thanks for the luv given

LOL@Purplemoons. Sort of sounds like you're a basic necessity, Queent. Am I on the right track with that? As always, enjoying your flow.


I did enjoy doing this one, thanks for the drop in.

One of the keys of success longevity is to continuously create original things, but the wisdom of how to create one thing original comes with years of righteous struggle and self-less giving. This is a truly original song/poem, an Afrikan lullaby, a song of desire, ode of devotion...all those things and more.
!!!!OutStanDing!!!!

Thanks a lot for your outstanding reply, I'm happy to know you enjoyed reading it.

tis poem is off the chains I thought you were talking about something else (wheres my head at)

tis poem is off the chains I thought you were talking about something else (wheres my head at)


Hi Altameeze,
Welcome to "Home" ...relax, let it all hang out...we're all family here, including yourself.
thanks for dropping love this way, there's so much to see and do here, you will no doubt enjoy it.
We also have a chatroom open 24/7 ...please stop in and hang with us anytime. www.destee.com/chat

I cover the waterfront!

I cover the waterfront!

Hi poet,
I see you found my "hide-a-way" ...lol
thanks for the stop by and luv, it meant a lot

This was hotness...Lovin' it