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oldsoul
11-11-2004, 11:58 PM
Unknown Universe (http://whgbetc.com/oldsoul/unknownuniverse.html)

You are an unknown universe
With trillions of energies
Inside a billion atoms
Of unknown galaxies.
You are an unknown universe
Full of emotional suns
With millions of hugs and hold mees
For all the unborn ones.
You are an unknown universe
Filled with oceans of planetary years
Blackness flowing sweetly through
Wisdom's uncountable tears.
You are an unknown universe
Unexplored starlites for miles
Dancing on radiant moonsets
A galatic rainbow of smiles.
You are an unknown universe
With extraordinary destinies
Filled with the virgin expectations
Of a billion galaxies.
You are an unknown universe
With a joyful essence pure
You are an unknown universe
And I am forever on tour.

--©11/11/04 (http://whgbetc.com/oldsoul)--

$$RICH$$
11-12-2004, 12:05 AM
this here make me think of self and a few that hold semly the unknown
universe within a galaxy of reasons .....i really enjoyed this piece

watzinaname
11-12-2004, 12:10 AM
Wow.....this is one of those pieces that is awfully hard to comment on, because to do so pales in comparison to what lies before us. I will simply say, that it's not easy to describe the indescribable, but you surely took us on a trip to which is, beyond. Wonderful flow brotha.

gempis
11-12-2004, 12:53 AM
Watz is right - I'm not sure what to say to do this piece justice, unless it might be "spellbound."

MzBlkAngel
11-12-2004, 08:02 AM
very deep...into the mental deep..makes ya ponder and look at your surroundings....flow head on

queentswana
11-14-2004, 09:40 PM
it's awesome

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