Feel me
~vodka

Broken Records
By Absolut®



"The Sweetest Melody"
Rose from these leaves of May
While so "Unchaining My Heart"
Knowing the blues of RAY

I felt..
...
My..
.......
Still Going
....
.....

Still...

I feel so..
...
left in the lost of until....
..
........I feel...
..
Forever loved my time on space
...I feel..
I've lost all my thoughts in tune
Over...
faces that just had to watch
Unsafe...unsafe
...
In touch
....
With eyes dotted in doom
.....
I feel...
..
Fate...
"Singing Me over the moon"
While
Piling Lies of beginning dates
Rise...
....soon
In...
The darkness of AM's **Wait**
But never enough...
I see these days
The road ahead looks...**fuzy**
And the going gets...**static**
I see these days..
Lyrically as a cloudy page
Literally
..
I want it to end
The pace...
The chase...
The penning of my RACE

Broken records,
...records broken
Broken records,
...records broken
Broken records,
...records broken
Broken records...broken records...broken records...

Sometimes we just get tired, dog tired, of the same old same old, the negativity, seemingly just stuck. We can feel that way about ourselves and our race as a whole. I feel ya poet, flow on as you do.

how i feel you here and u know when the time come a change will too
tyte drop

Oh yes, this is so on. How many times do we repeat the same mistakes and patterns before we learn. This was amazingly dropped.

It all comes to a quiet end at some point. Believe me I have heard that same record a time or two.
Nice piece.

This is the result…
Of a well thought out
And perfectly executed
Presentation…
The kind of stuff legends are made of
Nice use of rhythm

Sometimes it takes motivation to make
A transformation and break the record...
of a "Broken record"...

Excellent work!
Sage

tight vibing feeling this one
Peace
Angel