Remember the "train" that left yesterday?
in case you didn't know...I was on it.
~*~
this letter will reach you, in a day or two,
yes, my mind is made up, to be free of you.
~*~
I sold my heart, on the day I parted,
but who would buy something...that's broken hearted?
~*~
And that's not all, as I walked out the door,
I cried for you ...like never before.
~*~
I cried for the love, that you could've had,
and I cried for the fact, that it didn't last.
~*~
I cried because, you lost a good "Queen"...
and the purity in me...no other's have seen.
~*~
I could have loved you forever, if we rode the same track,
but you insisted on "holding and pulling" me back.
~*~
It took many years, to build what we had,
you crumbled my "Queen-dom"...that's so **** sad.
~*~
But my tears dried up...and my head is on straight,
I'm glad I pulled out, before it's too late.
~*~
Yes, I'm sitting here riding...got a long ways to go,
where I'll end up ...you'll never know.
~*~
cause all good things, must come to an end,
and I'll drop you a line ...every now and then.
:bye:

wheeew i know about this letter i have written and written this a thousand times..very heartfelt and it was soul deep as well nicely posed

Peace
Angel

This literally had me hearing 'By the Time I Get to Phoenix' by Isaac Hayes in the background as I was reading it. I would hate to be the one it was written to, cause they have no idea how lonely they're about to be.
Brilliant writing!!!!

well felt i've written this out time after time
very well heard and done flow on write it ....

Such sadness in this flow, the ache that is conveyed is strongly felt. But life does move on and sometimes it's best to just move on with it. Well written flow.

ur writing.......

WOW SIs A SLAMDOr real....A Slam to The Heart and To the pen!!!!!!

Wow
Decisions can onlyy be for the Better when it's doing whats best for the heart

WOW SIs A SLAMDOr real....A Slam to The Heart and To the pen!!!!!!

Wow
Decisions can onlyy be for the Better when it's doing whats best for the heart

Yes baby girl ...I put my heart in protective custody, locked it up and threw away the key.
thanks for the luv