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Absolut
10-26-2004, 10:57 PM
Simply Beautiful
By Absolut

Its beautifully simple...
how streams of all these thoughts were changing colors.
Mixes of splendid wonder
in a summer so grown & blessed
A morning fresh with dews of Love
slowly laying on me to rest.
It was there so simply pressed that all these blues flew into heart
And from this my dreams would turn forgetfullness into an art
...
.......
Becoming one from many parts of truth
for me through real-eyes
where the start of dawn should risk
my turning sight through Fluterred Byes.
and all These days i miss
They'd wisk away as butterflies
in times' design
I stayed..
in mind...
alone.....
disguised...
as a 'pillar of 'Deny' but cried inside
this feeling of my own
So taking me from home
my hopes are never waking up
To see the skies of love so forever breaking up
In red...
.....green......
..purple.....orange...
Blews
Til gone away was sadness from this set of rainbows' news
As happy days just do sometimes...
I remember you
....
Simply....
....Beautiful...
It's true
......although
You've been gone for so long
and I pretended it was right
For dreaming you away because your color was only white..
these days divorced my ways of light
And now this winters' night has played me cold
I've become too old
to remember why and when
closing my eyes hoping to dye again yesterday..
and then I see you....

I dunno this one sorta just wrote me..

Bluewater
10-26-2004, 11:14 PM
it wrote you becuase
you felt a urge
to express love unto the world
to bring a light on a gray day
blending of colors came to play

wonderful poem...very warm

BlueWater:heart:

gempis
10-26-2004, 11:48 PM
WHOA! That is so modest of you to say that it wrote you, cause you blazed this one so far up into the sky that planes couldn't reach it. This is amazing, poet.

Absolut
10-27-2004, 12:00 AM
Thanks ya'll....

Its nice to be around such encouraging folks kinda makes me wanna write

$$RICH$$
10-27-2004, 12:38 AM
this a masterpiece that wrote u so clear and awesomely
tyte write keep doing it up this was tweet !

watzinaname
10-27-2004, 01:56 AM
Such a beautiful a flow, all those lovely colors cascading down our minds. Wonderful.

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