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MzBlkAngel
10-25-2004, 01:12 AM
Momma say smile
The day will come
With no worries
And the pain will fade……

She kept her head up…

In the wind she stands
Lost and cold….
Wishing and praying
For that day to come
Momma said don’t let
No one take your joy….

But it faded….
She became a product
Of a crazy world
Momma said
Momma said…..

Well

13 yrs later condemn
In a messed up world
Trying to focus on reality
But the pain seeps
And the hurt grows
Her pillow is her best friend
Making her bed
Now she lays in it
As it soaks the pain
And burns like the opening of
A fire pit...flame coming from a dark soul…
As the life fades and the world
Turns in circles…..

Momma said keep your head up
No matter the pain…you shall rise

But
Lost in a world that burns like hell
Cold in the heat been stab and left
To bleed…smothered in her on pain
Can’t release
No where to go…
False faces all around
Reaching out but nothing is there

Momma ….what am I trying to see
its nothing there
Just living to die
Dying to live
I walk in sorrow…as the tears run
Wondering if it will every be
For the pain I carry
Hidden inside

Momma tell me
I need to know
Why must I fight this hard to live
The pain shots like lighting
as I carry my weight….

Momma said lift your head up
Child…..

And there you will see…


(C)2004
untitled life

$$RICH$$
10-25-2004, 01:29 AM
THE CREATIVITY WAS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love how u did this one flow on

AfroBoricuaRoni
10-25-2004, 02:55 AM
That was pure fire. Too hot. Too too hot. I enjoyed this piece.

MzBlkAngel
10-26-2004, 11:23 AM
Rich..wow you got me blushing

AfroBoricuaRoni..happy you enjoyed

Thank you both for the love and support on this scribe

Peace
Angel

$$RICH$$
10-26-2004, 01:14 PM
most welcome my dear flow on !

Bluewater
10-26-2004, 04:25 PM
oh sis
this is so sweet :)

BlueWater:heart:

gempis
10-26-2004, 11:39 PM
Whoa! This piece is a thing of beauty, sister.

MzBlkAngel
10-30-2004, 10:16 AM
thank you all for the support and love
Peace
Angel

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